for I am Chosen5/11/2014 c30 
3TriSX
Thanks... even if I don't review a lot, I still wait for an update. Althrough I don't remember giving you advise but hey... I must have forgoten about it a few months back... anyway, I can't wait what happens next.
3TriSXThanks... even if I don't review a lot, I still wait for an update. Althrough I don't remember giving you advise but hey... I must have forgoten about it a few months back... anyway, I can't wait what happens next.
5/9/2014 c30 10Aquade
Great chapter! What are their results going to say? And what are the guys going to choose?
Congratulations of finishing your finals!
10AquadeGreat chapter! What are their results going to say? And what are the guys going to choose?
Congratulations of finishing your finals!
5/9/2014 c30 2Terra Booma
I told you to write something out of your comfort zone?
...I don't remember this. XD
2Terra BoomaI told you to write something out of your comfort zone?
...I don't remember this. XD
5/9/2014 c30 1Krast Bannert
I think you missed an "s" at the end. You just had "Thank" and it looked awkward. As for my role in this, have I really been very blatantly honest? I've basically just been talking.
1Krast BannertI think you missed an "s" at the end. You just had "Thank" and it looked awkward. As for my role in this, have I really been very blatantly honest? I've basically just been talking.
5/9/2014 c30 5maggotea
This chapter is so great! Changing the memories seems really cool! And the music for this chapter was awesome
5maggoteaThis chapter is so great! Changing the memories seems really cool! And the music for this chapter was awesome
5/7/2014 c29 1Krast Bannert
"The Last Amazing Grays" by Sonata Arctica might work, of course you pretty much have to write a chapter to that song. I have about 1500 songs stocked up, so I'll let you know if I find any that might be of use.
1Krast Bannert"The Last Amazing Grays" by Sonata Arctica might work, of course you pretty much have to write a chapter to that song. I have about 1500 songs stocked up, so I'll let you know if I find any that might be of use.
5/2/2014 c28 1Krast Bannert
I didn't listen to it with music, sadly. I'll do it later, see if it's better.
1Krast BannertI didn't listen to it with music, sadly. I'll do it later, see if it's better.
5/2/2014 c28 10Aquade
They're going to be thrown out into the desert tomorrow. And they wrote the names of who died... I think that'll help them.
I wonder what the other Chosen will think? After all, she is their martyr now.
10AquadeThey're going to be thrown out into the desert tomorrow. And they wrote the names of who died... I think that'll help them.
I wonder what the other Chosen will think? After all, she is their martyr now.
5/2/2014 c28 5maggotea
The music was really fitting for the chapter! And I like the pen tattoos idea, it's really cool.
5maggoteaThe music was really fitting for the chapter! And I like the pen tattoos idea, it's really cool.
5/1/2014 c27 1Krast Bannert
Ouch, that's gotta hurt (I mean the exams). I've got OAAs (Ohio Achievement Assessments). Thing with those is, they test how well you take a test. Not your knowledge. You understand that? Cause I don't.
1Krast BannertOuch, that's gotta hurt (I mean the exams). I've got OAAs (Ohio Achievement Assessments). Thing with those is, they test how well you take a test. Not your knowledge. You understand that? Cause I don't.