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2/1/2014 c1 Jenn
Beautiful story about loss and despair. The contrast between the image of the delicate gentle quiet breeze and the hard steel real ness of the gun particularly struck me. I also appreciated the countdown of Dan and Bears' memories together. I could feel Bear's heartache and happiness as he relived each moment. Although the story started with sadness it ended with a spark of hope.

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