for Lyric2/3/2015 c10 
3morningstorm70
Sorry to hear you're under the weather
I hope you get better soon
I will be looking forward to your updates but your health is more important
3morningstorm70Sorry to hear you're under the weather
I hope you get better soon
I will be looking forward to your updates but your health is more important
6/2/2014 c8 Lovecupid
This chapter doesn't make sense to me. There is a huge gap between what happened in chapter 6 and chapter 7. How did Jesper and Lyric's relationship progress so fast when they have't had the talk yet. When did Salvator come back into the picture and what happened to that Slayer?
This chapter doesn't make sense to me. There is a huge gap between what happened in chapter 6 and chapter 7. How did Jesper and Lyric's relationship progress so fast when they have't had the talk yet. When did Salvator come back into the picture and what happened to that Slayer?
4/14/2014 c7 AsBrightAsTheMoon
:I sup
I've been gone...yep I do that sometimes... then there's school but I WILL BE HERE TO REVIEW AGAIN AND AGAIN AND AGAIN ish
o3o No excuses. HI how have you been? lol . I'm trying to entertain myself now...
anyways
GREAT CHAPTER UPDATE SOON
:I sup
I've been gone...yep I do that sometimes... then there's school but I WILL BE HERE TO REVIEW AGAIN AND AGAIN AND AGAIN ish
o3o No excuses. HI how have you been? lol . I'm trying to entertain myself now...
anyways
GREAT CHAPTER UPDATE SOON
3/25/2014 c7 Lovecupid
Finally the talk with Lyric's brother is coming. I can't wait to read more about Jesper's past and everything. Keep up the great work.
Finally the talk with Lyric's brother is coming. I can't wait to read more about Jesper's past and everything. Keep up the great work.
3/20/2014 c6 Lovecupid
Kuro has a twisted mind. I can't wait to read everyone's reaction to Kuro's presence. Keep up the great work.
Kuro has a twisted mind. I can't wait to read everyone's reaction to Kuro's presence. Keep up the great work.
2/21/2014 c5 KashiRyuu
Cute, I like this new story. The idea is great. I love the sweetness compared to your normal angst. This will go far.
Cute, I like this new story. The idea is great. I love the sweetness compared to your normal angst. This will go far.
2/14/2014 c5 AsBrightAsTheMoon
I'M BACK BABY...more or less it depends really. lol update soon you awesome writer you C:
I'M BACK BABY...more or less it depends really. lol update soon you awesome writer you C:
2/9/2014 c5 Lovecupid
Thank you and your making me blush with your compliment. And your welcome. :-D I can't wait to see what idea you came up with for your next chapter. This chapter is great because it gives a little insight on where Eon and Drew stand on Jinx and Lyric's relationship. Are you planning on maybe giving Drew and Eon their own story? I'm kind of curious about how they got together. Keep up the great work.
Thank you and your making me blush with your compliment. And your welcome. :-D I can't wait to see what idea you came up with for your next chapter. This chapter is great because it gives a little insight on where Eon and Drew stand on Jinx and Lyric's relationship. Are you planning on maybe giving Drew and Eon their own story? I'm kind of curious about how they got together. Keep up the great work.
2/7/2014 c4 Lovecupid
This story is good. I want Lyric to finally have a long proper conversation with his brother because I feel bad for Jesper, I think he might have left his brother alone for so long to protect him. During the conversation between the brothers, Jesper should discuss what he has been going through over the past centuries that he was away from Lyric and about this Salvator person whose obsess with him. Maybe the conversation will be the first step in healing their relationship. Keep up the great work. Can't wait to read more.
This story is good. I want Lyric to finally have a long proper conversation with his brother because I feel bad for Jesper, I think he might have left his brother alone for so long to protect him. During the conversation between the brothers, Jesper should discuss what he has been going through over the past centuries that he was away from Lyric and about this Salvator person whose obsess with him. Maybe the conversation will be the first step in healing their relationship. Keep up the great work. Can't wait to read more.