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6/12/2014 c1 277electrical moon
Great first line that pulls you into the poem and wonderful line breaks. I really love the image of him stealing the flowers and of static light sticking to the mother's pores and skin.
2/28/2014 c1 20Ventracere
The structure of your poem is unique and different, with all the spaces you left in between. It gives the poem a break, a silent pause where nothing is spoken. You place them well so you can hit home the message you want. I also thought your use of anaphora was interesting - the repetitiveness also highlights the several different forms Lucifer/Satan can be, and how close the devil is. I also enjoyed your visuals, the imagery helped hone the pictures that came into mind.
2/15/2014 c1 66forgottenwords7
Oh wow, this was fantastic and I especially loved the imagery, it was so captivating. Brilliant work! This kinda reminded me of the show Supernatural to be honest ;)
2/13/2014 c1 4DeanWinchester'sDreamGirl
Very well written! I liked this a lot!

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