for Taboo Teacher3/1/2014 c3 Lovecupid
This is a great story with some mistakes like I mentioned in my last review where the first two chapters are the same. But also in this chapter in the sentence "... were opportunities of a lifetime I passing up." It should be [I'm] passing up. Another mistake I noticed was in the last sentence of this chapter you need to eliminate "I" after hired me. Keep up the great work.
This is a great story with some mistakes like I mentioned in my last review where the first two chapters are the same. But also in this chapter in the sentence "... were opportunities of a lifetime I passing up." It should be [I'm] passing up. Another mistake I noticed was in the last sentence of this chapter you need to eliminate "I" after hired me. Keep up the great work.
2/16/2014 c2 Prin rox
It's really great and I think it's going to continue being great if u keep updating so please do... For my sake because this is the most interesting thing I'm reading at the moment!
It's really great and I think it's going to continue being great if u keep updating so please do... For my sake because this is the most interesting thing I'm reading at the moment!
2/15/2014 c2 RomanceObsessed
Why would one of the youngest, most renowned molecular biologists in the country be teaching high school science?
Why would one of the youngest, most renowned molecular biologists in the country be teaching high school science?