for Dru8/25/2022 c6 Birdnicks
Heya, it’s a long shot, but is there any chance you’ll be going back to this? It’s so well-written and stereotype-free, I’m really loving it! The world and characters you’re building are absolutely delightful and I’d hate to see such a story be abandoned (also I am way too much into it not to hope)!
Heya, it’s a long shot, but is there any chance you’ll be going back to this? It’s so well-written and stereotype-free, I’m really loving it! The world and characters you’re building are absolutely delightful and I’d hate to see such a story be abandoned (also I am way too much into it not to hope)!
1/7/2022 c5 kiara jasmine
hi :) my name is nina, an editor for a fast growing platform, i am interested in your work, may i know how to reach you professionally?
hi :) my name is nina, an editor for a fast growing platform, i am interested in your work, may i know how to reach you professionally?
12/24/2021 c1 avalavaa
Dear author, I like the intro and I feel you have big potential to be a great author. I have an information about a writing contest. You should join and submit your story here is the announcement:
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Dear author, I like the intro and I feel you have big potential to be a great author. I have an information about a writing contest. You should join and submit your story here is the announcement:
bit. ly/ 2Yr0vLC
12/24/2020 c6 Unit
I'll mow your lawn, I'll wash your dishes, I'll even do your taxes for you if you promise to update this thing soon! I love werewolf books but almost all of them are crappy, and yours is the absolute best I've ever read except it's only 6 chapters!
I'll mow your lawn, I'll wash your dishes, I'll even do your taxes for you if you promise to update this thing soon! I love werewolf books but almost all of them are crappy, and yours is the absolute best I've ever read except it's only 6 chapters!
6/5/2020 c1 Unit
Honestly, Maeghan, this story is hands down the best werewolf story I've ever read. You actually bother to create your own world and develop your characters when most people just rely on whatever werewolf rules of the genre are popular at the time and have flat-as-paper characters with no deelopment. I just wish that you could update more/faster. But regardless when you do update, we'll be here to read it. We've been following along for years and can't wait till it's finally completed. Doesn't matter if it's not 100% perfect, it's still load better than 99% of the stuff that's out there.
Honestly, Maeghan, this story is hands down the best werewolf story I've ever read. You actually bother to create your own world and develop your characters when most people just rely on whatever werewolf rules of the genre are popular at the time and have flat-as-paper characters with no deelopment. I just wish that you could update more/faster. But regardless when you do update, we'll be here to read it. We've been following along for years and can't wait till it's finally completed. Doesn't matter if it's not 100% perfect, it's still load better than 99% of the stuff that's out there.
5/29/2020 c6 Unit
I NEED MORE! It's brilliant to see your writing improve, but I hope that we' seeing more of these updates soon!
I NEED MORE! It's brilliant to see your writing improve, but I hope that we' seeing more of these updates soon!
5/9/2020 c6 MG777
Hey, so nice to see, that you found time to Update! I didn't get a story alert, and wanted to reread the first few chapters. You can imagin how happy I was to find two new chapters. Please continue soon!
Hey, so nice to see, that you found time to Update! I didn't get a story alert, and wanted to reread the first few chapters. You can imagin how happy I was to find two new chapters. Please continue soon!
4/22/2020 c6 GloomySundayMorning
Well, well, well you're revealing the colors much earlier with this new perspective... And I like it !
It's really nice to see Nikolai point of view and it's not exactly the dynamic I expected between him and the Sovereigns. It's nice to see behind the facade all of three make in front of Katie.
I really do like political cant
I do not know if the idea of mating or rather the reluctance of the Sovereigns to it between Nikolai and Katie is new or if it was already there in the last version of the story and you just did not had time to publish it yet (If I had to bet I will choose the later since the mating did not appear in the beginning either before)
What I really enjoyed in this chapter is how you make dialogs sound. You're so so good with italics, it makes the exchanges alive. I can hear when I read the intonations you wanted (or at least that I thougt you wanted ). It's really great
If I remember correctly Katie is soon to be reminded of reading papers before signing them but it's been a long time so I hope to find out if I'm right soon ;)
Well, well, well you're revealing the colors much earlier with this new perspective... And I like it !
It's really nice to see Nikolai point of view and it's not exactly the dynamic I expected between him and the Sovereigns. It's nice to see behind the facade all of three make in front of Katie.
I really do like political cant
I do not know if the idea of mating or rather the reluctance of the Sovereigns to it between Nikolai and Katie is new or if it was already there in the last version of the story and you just did not had time to publish it yet (If I had to bet I will choose the later since the mating did not appear in the beginning either before)
What I really enjoyed in this chapter is how you make dialogs sound. You're so so good with italics, it makes the exchanges alive. I can hear when I read the intonations you wanted (or at least that I thougt you wanted ). It's really great
If I remember correctly Katie is soon to be reminded of reading papers before signing them but it's been a long time so I hope to find out if I'm right soon ;)
4/22/2020 c5 GloomySundayMorning
Hey :)
I'm so happy to read you've still been working on this story and that you managed to overcome the issue of the new scene of this chapter 5 in order to publish
I really like the atmosphere you're able to describe when there is subtle text ans meanings in conversation, the power struggle between the characters etc. I might have already said it but it's one of the thing I like most about this story because it makes it so real since also in real life communication go throught more than just words.
I created myself an account so I could be warned when you add a new chapter (I thought I did it before but it didn't work so I'm glad I still check this story regularly)
Good luck for the rest of your quarantine - it's been more than a month for me and I'm almost out of stories to read on FP and FF so a HUGE thank you very much for this 2 chapters to keep me company :)
Gloomy
Hey :)
I'm so happy to read you've still been working on this story and that you managed to overcome the issue of the new scene of this chapter 5 in order to publish
I really like the atmosphere you're able to describe when there is subtle text ans meanings in conversation, the power struggle between the characters etc. I might have already said it but it's one of the thing I like most about this story because it makes it so real since also in real life communication go throught more than just words.
I created myself an account so I could be warned when you add a new chapter (I thought I did it before but it didn't work so I'm glad I still check this story regularly)
Good luck for the rest of your quarantine - it's been more than a month for me and I'm almost out of stories to read on FP and FF so a HUGE thank you very much for this 2 chapters to keep me company :)
Gloomy
4/21/2020 c6 BookSpaz808
Ooohhh I really like Nikolai's point of view! It's always interesting to get the other person's perspective, especially when it's done well! Can't wait to read more!
Ooohhh I really like Nikolai's point of view! It's always interesting to get the other person's perspective, especially when it's done well! Can't wait to read more!
3/7/2020 c4 Unit
Why no updates?
Why no updates?
1/23/2020 c4 Happy ReaderAnon
I've missed this story! It's such an interesting take on werewolf lore and dynamics. I'll be checking on it every couple of weeks now! And I want you to know - when you get this published I am buying a copy ASAP!
I've missed this story! It's such an interesting take on werewolf lore and dynamics. I'll be checking on it every couple of weeks now! And I want you to know - when you get this published I am buying a copy ASAP!
1/5/2020 c4 Gloomy
Hello
I'm sorry I did not review sooner but I went to a roadtrip in central Europe and with Christmas I did not think to check your story until now :)
I remember this awkward conversation with the queen quite well as well as the rude and embarrassing introduction between the two.
I'm afraid I did not catch any change this time.
I'm looking forward for the next chapters
Meanwhile you're edititing them, I wish you a happy new year :)
Gloomy
Hello
I'm sorry I did not review sooner but I went to a roadtrip in central Europe and with Christmas I did not think to check your story until now :)
I remember this awkward conversation with the queen quite well as well as the rude and embarrassing introduction between the two.
I'm afraid I did not catch any change this time.
I'm looking forward for the next chapters
Meanwhile you're edititing them, I wish you a happy new year :)
Gloomy
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