4/29/2015 c11 Buhbyesuckers
I LOVE THIS STORY!
when do you update? Is it regular or when you have time?
I LOVE THIS STORY!
when do you update? Is it regular or when you have time?
4/28/2015 c11 NoOrdinaryMagic
Oh shit! This was a twist that I definitely didn't see coming! I seriously hope that Nikolai is just messing with her to pay her back for those comments. I mean, yes Katie needs to think before she speaks and yes what she said was wrong and hurtful, but his wolf could seriously injure her. Thank you for the update! I was so excited to see this in my in box! I do hope that you won't leave us dangling from this cliffhanger for too long. This was another awesome chapter! :)
Oh shit! This was a twist that I definitely didn't see coming! I seriously hope that Nikolai is just messing with her to pay her back for those comments. I mean, yes Katie needs to think before she speaks and yes what she said was wrong and hurtful, but his wolf could seriously injure her. Thank you for the update! I was so excited to see this in my in box! I do hope that you won't leave us dangling from this cliffhanger for too long. This was another awesome chapter! :)
4/28/2015 c11 Lil
1. For the love of god update soon this is what I have been waiting for
2. I hope that he uses humanity cause otherwise he could really hurt her which would be messed up
1. For the love of god update soon this is what I have been waiting for
2. I hope that he uses humanity cause otherwise he could really hurt her which would be messed up
4/27/2015 c11 unit
YOU CAN'T DO THAT. Not after we've waiteD so long for an update. Now you are obliged to update again within the week or else you are going to lose all your readers. Seriously NOT COOL.
That being said, you do a wonderful job of crating gray characters that are not all good or bad (Or are goOd but do a lot of stupid things) You have a solid old statis set up for both Nic and kat as well as interesting background stories for the minor characters as well. I'm excited to see what the new statis will be for the both of them.
And truly, you must update incredibly soon. You must.
YOU CAN'T DO THAT. Not after we've waiteD so long for an update. Now you are obliged to update again within the week or else you are going to lose all your readers. Seriously NOT COOL.
That being said, you do a wonderful job of crating gray characters that are not all good or bad (Or are goOd but do a lot of stupid things) You have a solid old statis set up for both Nic and kat as well as interesting background stories for the minor characters as well. I'm excited to see what the new statis will be for the both of them.
And truly, you must update incredibly soon. You must.
4/27/2015 c11 9Mickey Phinney
Sooo I've been a silent reader for a while now, I just wanted to say good job and this chapter was a twist I wasn't expecting :)
Sooo I've been a silent reader for a while now, I just wanted to say good job and this chapter was a twist I wasn't expecting :)
4/27/2015 c11 5DelQu
Ugh, so many mistakes in my last review... I need stop writing these on my phone! Still, this isn't much of a review, but I have to say that I can't wait to see what happens next. Hope to see an update sooner rather than later!
Ugh, so many mistakes in my last review... I need stop writing these on my phone! Still, this isn't much of a review, but I have to say that I can't wait to see what happens next. Hope to see an update sooner rather than later!
4/27/2015 c11 RomanceObsessed
I am really excited for the next chapter! I hope it comes quickly. This is a well written story
I am really excited for the next chapter! I hope it comes quickly. This is a well written story
4/26/2015 c11 Guest
Update this shit like right now oh my gosh I'm dead lmao he is such a douche!
Update this shit like right now oh my gosh I'm dead lmao he is such a douche!
4/10/2015 c10 DelQu
Seriously! You need to update! I'm-like- dying to read more! Know this isnt much of a review or anything-I do plan on writing a lengthy one once the romance starts(Yeah, I'm once of those people)-but I seriously cannot wait for another update! Jeesh, every time I see a story update in my inbox, I always pray it's your story that's been update. Then the disappointment settles in when I see its not your story (not saying the other stories aren't enjoyable to read...it just feels like forever since you last updated!). Keep up the excellent work! Can't wait to read more!
Seriously! You need to update! I'm-like- dying to read more! Know this isnt much of a review or anything-I do plan on writing a lengthy one once the romance starts(Yeah, I'm once of those people)-but I seriously cannot wait for another update! Jeesh, every time I see a story update in my inbox, I always pray it's your story that's been update. Then the disappointment settles in when I see its not your story (not saying the other stories aren't enjoyable to read...it just feels like forever since you last updated!). Keep up the excellent work! Can't wait to read more!
3/7/2015 c10 unit
There's a mistake here, you switch into third person in the middle:
"He was in a better mood, I realized, something akin to discomfort swirling its way around my stomach. After killing two of his own kind, he was now… well **she** certainly wouldn't say he was joking and happy as he interacted with the son of the Sovereigns… "
Other than that, fantastic as usual and seriously can't wait till the next update!
There's a mistake here, you switch into third person in the middle:
"He was in a better mood, I realized, something akin to discomfort swirling its way around my stomach. After killing two of his own kind, he was now… well **she** certainly wouldn't say he was joking and happy as he interacted with the son of the Sovereigns… "
Other than that, fantastic as usual and seriously can't wait till the next update!
3/4/2015 c10 LetMeWonder
I am really enjoying this story! I like how she doesn't let him get her down and keeps fighting back. :)
I am really enjoying this story! I like how she doesn't let him get her down and keeps fighting back. :)
2/27/2015 c10 Amber
Love this so much! Hope you update soon!
Love this so much! Hope you update soon!
2/26/2015 c10 Guest
Wowed this is an INCREDIBLE story! Please update when you can.
Wowed this is an INCREDIBLE story! Please update when you can.
2/26/2015 c10 Guest
I know it says "not your normal werewolf-human story" in the description but can something happen between Nicolai and Katie? Because Nicolai just seems like he completely hates Katie. Katie just seems like an annoyance, can she provide something as an enforcer?
I know it says "not your normal werewolf-human story" in the description but can something happen between Nicolai and Katie? Because Nicolai just seems like he completely hates Katie. Katie just seems like an annoyance, can she provide something as an enforcer?
2/25/2015 c10 EireGal
I'm delighted that you have updated this story relatively quickly. It was an interesting chapter, I thought it started off a bit slow, but certainly maintained my interest and by the end had added an excellent twist to your plot.
I'm delighted that you have updated this story relatively quickly. It was an interesting chapter, I thought it started off a bit slow, but certainly maintained my interest and by the end had added an excellent twist to your plot.