for Dru4/14/2018 c1 Guest
Get your butt into shape and update honey
Get your butt into shape and update honey
3/20/2018 c1 Guest
Any updates?
Any updates?
2/9/2018 c1 Unit
No one in the history of freaking out was ever calmed by the phrase "don't freak out" ever.
No one in the history of freaking out was ever calmed by the phrase "don't freak out" ever.
12/28/2017 c1 MG777
Hey, I just wanted to reread your story and found it all gone. I hope that means you eventually will publish it! That would be so great! Please keep us updated!
Hey, I just wanted to reread your story and found it all gone. I hope that means you eventually will publish it! That would be so great! Please keep us updated!
10/29/2017 c1 livingofstories
Part of me is freaking out but in a good way? A lot of us loved this fic even if you weren't sure about it on certain aspects. So I am just happy you didn't fully drop it but are planning to do something with it :) Or at least I assume so.
Part of me is freaking out but in a good way? A lot of us loved this fic even if you weren't sure about it on certain aspects. So I am just happy you didn't fully drop it but are planning to do something with it :) Or at least I assume so.
10/28/2017 c1 slcjnk2008
Happy to hear that there will be more to come soon and thrilled to hear from you.
Happy to hear that there will be more to come soon and thrilled to hear from you.
9/4/2017 c1 Anon. V
I hope, wherever you are, that you're enjoying life with a smile!
But please don't forget about us. And if you never finish this on FP - I beg of you - please try to get this story published even if it's ten years from now. Even as a simple EBook! It seems all my favorite authors and stories are fading away, but I don't wish for them to be forgotten completely. :3
Best of wishes, all the luck, may the force be with you, a strong wind in your sails
~Anonymous V
I hope, wherever you are, that you're enjoying life with a smile!
But please don't forget about us. And if you never finish this on FP - I beg of you - please try to get this story published even if it's ten years from now. Even as a simple EBook! It seems all my favorite authors and stories are fading away, but I don't wish for them to be forgotten completely. :3
Best of wishes, all the luck, may the force be with you, a strong wind in your sails
~Anonymous V
5/30/2017 c17 annabanana1994
18th chapter review. I already reviewed but I forgot to add something...
I would love to help you with the story if the spot is still available...
18th chapter review. I already reviewed but I forgot to add something...
I would love to help you with the story if the spot is still available...
5/30/2017 c18 annabanana1994
Hi! First of all, I want to tell you that I love your story and I can't wait for you to continue writing it!
With that being said... I would like to help you with the story. I'm going to answer your questions;
1. I love Katie. I love the fact that she was completely blind about the council, and now she has discovered a lot of the truth. It is also true that sometimes I feel like she doesn't ask the right questions. For example, I expected this to be about Katie and Nikolai, but she never asks him about why he acts as he acts when he is with her; the mating, for example, seemed more forced on Katie's side, than on Nikolai's side... And that would be an interesting topic to be talked about taking into consideration that it is his wolf, aka his instinct, that performs the deed...
2. I love Nikolai. I love when he loses control and lets Katie see what he really feels about her (in some way...)
3. I didn't have a problem with the sex scene... in fact, I think that "the wolf" acted sweetly and calmly... I didn't appreciate the ending of the chapter as much... I kind of feel like he could have spent the night with her and nothing would have happened... I understand that it adds to the fact that they didn't want each other then, but I feel like Katie could have felt as a whore...
4. I don't mind the age gap. However, I feel that because she was raised by a rich family, going to college seems like a must. Also, even though it could seem like she would be more mature and less naive, I feel that, as a fresh out of college student, I identify with Katy in some things.
5. I prefer the first POV... at least for this story, it kind of seems more personal...
6. I don't think there's too much that should be left out... In fact, I feel like there are certain moments when more detail should be added to make the understanding of the situation better. For example, I remember in the chapter when the go to Canada, when they were going from the plane until Nikolai starts scenting her (more or less), there are things that are not explained very well and that makes it difficult to understand (The process of changing from one vehicle to the other, I didn't understand if they were using the same vehicles or not, or whether Nikolai went ahead or not). Everything was understood in the end, and it wasn't such important things, they were not important to the main plot of the story. There were a couple more, but again, not very important as a whole...
Now I would like to add something of my own... I love the story, but it seem like the pace is not very fast, and at the same time, it is very very fast... I kind of expected the story to be more focused on the two protagonists and how they came to love and understand each other (their cultures and such...). Being the topic of the war, a backstory. However, they haven't advanced in their relationship, except for the fact that they are mated... which doesn't seem to change anything.
A good point to talk about, that could help in the developing of their relationship, is the topic of "TRUST". It is something that is discussed constantly since the mating, but still, it is not something that is addressed from Katie's perspective... It could be a middle ground for them... in the same way Katie is growing to understand werewolves, Nikolai would be able to understand how humans work. How they have to trust blindly, expecting the trusted person to fulfill the expectations that have been set for them... That's how love in the real world works.. you trust a person to be faithful and love you, and the trust you back. We take risks.
Hi! First of all, I want to tell you that I love your story and I can't wait for you to continue writing it!
With that being said... I would like to help you with the story. I'm going to answer your questions;
1. I love Katie. I love the fact that she was completely blind about the council, and now she has discovered a lot of the truth. It is also true that sometimes I feel like she doesn't ask the right questions. For example, I expected this to be about Katie and Nikolai, but she never asks him about why he acts as he acts when he is with her; the mating, for example, seemed more forced on Katie's side, than on Nikolai's side... And that would be an interesting topic to be talked about taking into consideration that it is his wolf, aka his instinct, that performs the deed...
2. I love Nikolai. I love when he loses control and lets Katie see what he really feels about her (in some way...)
3. I didn't have a problem with the sex scene... in fact, I think that "the wolf" acted sweetly and calmly... I didn't appreciate the ending of the chapter as much... I kind of feel like he could have spent the night with her and nothing would have happened... I understand that it adds to the fact that they didn't want each other then, but I feel like Katie could have felt as a whore...
4. I don't mind the age gap. However, I feel that because she was raised by a rich family, going to college seems like a must. Also, even though it could seem like she would be more mature and less naive, I feel that, as a fresh out of college student, I identify with Katy in some things.
5. I prefer the first POV... at least for this story, it kind of seems more personal...
6. I don't think there's too much that should be left out... In fact, I feel like there are certain moments when more detail should be added to make the understanding of the situation better. For example, I remember in the chapter when the go to Canada, when they were going from the plane until Nikolai starts scenting her (more or less), there are things that are not explained very well and that makes it difficult to understand (The process of changing from one vehicle to the other, I didn't understand if they were using the same vehicles or not, or whether Nikolai went ahead or not). Everything was understood in the end, and it wasn't such important things, they were not important to the main plot of the story. There were a couple more, but again, not very important as a whole...
Now I would like to add something of my own... I love the story, but it seem like the pace is not very fast, and at the same time, it is very very fast... I kind of expected the story to be more focused on the two protagonists and how they came to love and understand each other (their cultures and such...). Being the topic of the war, a backstory. However, they haven't advanced in their relationship, except for the fact that they are mated... which doesn't seem to change anything.
A good point to talk about, that could help in the developing of their relationship, is the topic of "TRUST". It is something that is discussed constantly since the mating, but still, it is not something that is addressed from Katie's perspective... It could be a middle ground for them... in the same way Katie is growing to understand werewolves, Nikolai would be able to understand how humans work. How they have to trust blindly, expecting the trusted person to fulfill the expectations that have been set for them... That's how love in the real world works.. you trust a person to be faithful and love you, and the trust you back. We take risks.
5/28/2017 c1 annabanana1994
I can't be sure by just reading the first chapter... but, are they hiding something from her? something important? such as the fact that maybe she has to marry someone?... Why does it have to be a woman if not? And why isn't she asking those questions? They seem kind of obvious...
I can't be sure by just reading the first chapter... but, are they hiding something from her? something important? such as the fact that maybe she has to marry someone?... Why does it have to be a woman if not? And why isn't she asking those questions? They seem kind of obvious...
12/17/2016 c1 Unit
Is there no hope?
Is there no hope?