for The Mermaid Disease1/23/2022 c3 heelenah
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nicee story I want to 0ffer you something related to your work. may I ask your 3mail so we could send the detail? Thanks
8/4/2019 c2 LucyRowanVictoria
Interesting! Vamprye mermaids. Or is it mermaid vampryers?
Regardless, a well-done beginning.
One question though: why would the merman be a threat to his family while they are on land?
Interesting! Vamprye mermaids. Or is it mermaid vampryers?
Regardless, a well-done beginning.
One question though: why would the merman be a threat to his family while they are on land?
5/20/2018 c9 Guest
Aw, this story is prettamente awesome, hope you will write on a bit more but I get it, college, ugh. Have a nice day!
Aw, this story is prettamente awesome, hope you will write on a bit more but I get it, college, ugh. Have a nice day!
7/22/2017 c9 
7gulistala
I really like this story so far- it's a bir more realistic and Kelsea isn't a damsel, I like that she does talk back and holds her own and despite Izmuir's attractiveness she marches on.
I do wonder how old Izmuir is, also how the heck did the pompous arse not realise striking a deal like that forcefully turning Kelsea would not be a fun thing for Kelsea? I still think he's a jerk, bit of a chauvinist but also can appreciate that culturally it's probably all he's ever known. I'm curious about the female numbers. Also who were the merfolk knocking on the ship?
Keep up the great work can't wait for more!
7gulistalaI really like this story so far- it's a bir more realistic and Kelsea isn't a damsel, I like that she does talk back and holds her own and despite Izmuir's attractiveness she marches on.
I do wonder how old Izmuir is, also how the heck did the pompous arse not realise striking a deal like that forcefully turning Kelsea would not be a fun thing for Kelsea? I still think he's a jerk, bit of a chauvinist but also can appreciate that culturally it's probably all he's ever known. I'm curious about the female numbers. Also who were the merfolk knocking on the ship?
Keep up the great work can't wait for more!
3/3/2017 c9 Guest
ahhhh this is getting exciting! good work!
ahhhh this is getting exciting! good work!
2/25/2017 c9 Guest
This is awesome. I love anything mermaid/merman! Thanks so much!
This is awesome. I love anything mermaid/merman! Thanks so much!
12/27/2016 c8 Guest
Hi, this is so good could you please update?
Hi, this is so good could you please update?
12/26/2016 c8 Guest
Please update this is so good
Please update this is so good
7/24/2016 c5 Deletedaccount436
Ah, at least we have more of an idea what is going on now. This chapter wasn't too bad )
Ah, at least we have more of an idea what is going on now. This chapter wasn't too bad )
7/24/2016 c4 Deletedaccount436
Hmm, I find it interesting she didn't put up a fight or show more emotion over the fact she'll be leaving her family behind.
Hmm, I find it interesting she didn't put up a fight or show more emotion over the fact she'll be leaving her family behind.
7/24/2016 c3 Deletedaccount436
This chapter wasn’t bad, but it didn’t really draw me in. Your description of the sisters had too much telling and not enough showing. When she got bite, the dialogue was…hmm…unbelievable. I don’t want to keep pointing out the flaws because I know this can be a great story, it just needs some work. I’ll keep reading, though.
This chapter wasn’t bad, but it didn’t really draw me in. Your description of the sisters had too much telling and not enough showing. When she got bite, the dialogue was…hmm…unbelievable. I don’t want to keep pointing out the flaws because I know this can be a great story, it just needs some work. I’ll keep reading, though.
7/24/2016 c2 Deletedaccount436
Interesting. I am also writing a story about mermen and mermaids, and it’s rare to find another author who writes the same. The first chapter has intrigued me, though. It’s clear what the merman wants, but I wonder what his backstory is.
Interesting. I am also writing a story about mermen and mermaids, and it’s rare to find another author who writes the same. The first chapter has intrigued me, though. It’s clear what the merman wants, but I wonder what his backstory is.
7/14/2016 c8 5RebekahFyre
My guess is Dolphins. They talked to each other! Progress! Keep writing! I love your story and can't wait to see what happens next.
Does she not know that she is being turned into a mermaid in exchange for her father's life? I mean, that would help me come to terms with it a bit better, don't know about her.
5RebekahFyreMy guess is Dolphins. They talked to each other! Progress! Keep writing! I love your story and can't wait to see what happens next.
Does she not know that she is being turned into a mermaid in exchange for her father's life? I mean, that would help me come to terms with it a bit better, don't know about her.
6/26/2016 c8 Sakuradreamer85
Ah man! This was really good! I hope there's more coming!
Please update soon! I really liked this! Probably my favorite story so far on fictionpress! Ah!
I really like the premise! _ please update soon
Ah man! This was really good! I hope there's more coming!
Please update soon! I really liked this! Probably my favorite story so far on fictionpress! Ah!
I really like the premise! _ please update soon