for Hiding in Plain Sight7/26/2016 c7 anne
love the story
love the story
7/7/2016 c7 Canada 1
Well done. I wish you would continue writing more. Are you doing so elsewhere?
Well done. I wish you would continue writing more. Are you doing so elsewhere?
5/29/2015 c7 fivesevenfive
Cute story and great characters. The ending was abrupt in my opinion though suitable anyhow.
Cute story and great characters. The ending was abrupt in my opinion though suitable anyhow.
10/23/2014 c7 amy
everything about this story was awesome. I read it all in one day. You are a great writer.
everything about this story was awesome. I read it all in one day. You are a great writer.
9/29/2014 c7 toffeema
Wow, this was great! I'm so surprised you don't have more reviews - you are a talented writer and this story was short but perfect the way it is. Thanks for sharing.
Wow, this was great! I'm so surprised you don't have more reviews - you are a talented writer and this story was short but perfect the way it is. Thanks for sharing.
7/4/2014 c7 Swati
Just absolutely loved this story! You're really talented and I wish you'd write more on will and iris. I'd really like to see more wris :)
Just absolutely loved this story! You're really talented and I wish you'd write more on will and iris. I'd really like to see more wris :)
5/29/2014 c1 jessskaaaaa
i love this story! it showered me in cute feels, thanks for writing this hehe
i love this story! it showered me in cute feels, thanks for writing this hehe
5/18/2014 c7 525600 minutes
Hey, so I read this and all of your other stories today instead of revising...thanks for the procrastination! All of your stuff is really good but I think this is my favourite just because you can properly develop characters since it's longer. I particularly loved the ending because you managed to avoid making it too obvious. Thank-you for putting such good writing on this site :)
Hey, so I read this and all of your other stories today instead of revising...thanks for the procrastination! All of your stuff is really good but I think this is my favourite just because you can properly develop characters since it's longer. I particularly loved the ending because you managed to avoid making it too obvious. Thank-you for putting such good writing on this site :)
5/8/2014 c7 PrincessPeach131
This is great! I love all your stories and can't wait for the next one to come out! You're great at actually giving depth to characters, even in just a few chapters, and sparks really fly in your stories.
This is great! I love all your stories and can't wait for the next one to come out! You're great at actually giving depth to characters, even in just a few chapters, and sparks really fly in your stories.
4/18/2014 c7 
2sunshinernnr
loved this story! It was unpredictable and charming. I thought the pacing and dialogue were spot on, and the characters felt realistic, rather than being stereotypes.
2sunshinernnrloved this story! It was unpredictable and charming. I thought the pacing and dialogue were spot on, and the characters felt realistic, rather than being stereotypes.
4/17/2014 c7 cu-12
This was such a cute story! I'm loving your one shots too! You've got great stories, and I hope you keep writing!
This was such a cute story! I'm loving your one shots too! You've got great stories, and I hope you keep writing!
4/13/2014 c7 Christina
Amazing story! This is just the type of story that I love. I am surprised at the number of reviews it has though. I hope you keep writing these fantastic masterpieces. I can't get enough.
- Christina
Amazing story! This is just the type of story that I love. I am surprised at the number of reviews it has though. I hope you keep writing these fantastic masterpieces. I can't get enough.
- Christina
4/12/2014 c7 Guest
I think you have a great start of a story here. I like it but it would have been better if you didn't skip all those weeks in between their meetings and maybe had more run ins between the two. You have got some serious talent. -Sullivan89
I think you have a great start of a story here. I like it but it would have been better if you didn't skip all those weeks in between their meetings and maybe had more run ins between the two. You have got some serious talent. -Sullivan89