for Deny3/13/2014 c1 
16John-the-H-is-silent
I'm so glad you're still writing! This poem had such a surreal and unsettling feel to it. There was great imagery throughout the entire piece. Every line was appealing to me in that it made me stop and think before moving on. I'm curious as to what inspired you to write this poem.
"Applauding fingers and greedy whirs,
There's a whisper in the air
Wolves of nostalgia, goaded in herds.."
Great stuff! :)
16John-the-H-is-silentI'm so glad you're still writing! This poem had such a surreal and unsettling feel to it. There was great imagery throughout the entire piece. Every line was appealing to me in that it made me stop and think before moving on. I'm curious as to what inspired you to write this poem.
"Applauding fingers and greedy whirs,
There's a whisper in the air
Wolves of nostalgia, goaded in herds.."
Great stuff! :)