
9/6/2014 c5 MT
Awesome story so far! Although she's kinda stuck up... Would love to see what happens next!
Awesome story so far! Although she's kinda stuck up... Would love to see what happens next!
4/7/2014 c5
5Max Sorrell
I really liked the flash back. It reminded me of how I was like as a kid. I know a bit more about death than Angel though because my mom had sat me down one day and explained about it and Heaven and Hell. Death is confusing though so I can see why Angel was the way she was. :(

I really liked the flash back. It reminded me of how I was like as a kid. I know a bit more about death than Angel though because my mom had sat me down one day and explained about it and Heaven and Hell. Death is confusing though so I can see why Angel was the way she was. :(
4/3/2014 c4 Max Sorrell
I love the contrast in Nico and Angel. Nico gives the story a really interesting point of view and I agree with him even though he isn't royal that doesn't mean he's worth less.
I love the contrast in Nico and Angel. Nico gives the story a really interesting point of view and I agree with him even though he isn't royal that doesn't mean he's worth less.
3/10/2014 c2 Max Sorrell
Awesome writing! :D
Nico seems like an interesting character. I found it funny and believable how quickly his attitude toward Angel changed once he learned her real identity. XD
Awesome writing! :D
Nico seems like an interesting character. I found it funny and believable how quickly his attitude toward Angel changed once he learned her real identity. XD
3/8/2014 c1 Max Sorrell
I love your start. The poem, the description of the main characters, everything is perfect so far! I can't wait for the next chapter. :D
I love your start. The poem, the description of the main characters, everything is perfect so far! I can't wait for the next chapter. :D
3/8/2014 c1 Mikarru
Aww, the poem and the writing is beautiful. You have a gift. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Aww, the poem and the writing is beautiful. You have a gift. Can't wait for the next chapter :)