for A Goddess Wears Orange4/16/2014 c14 choc me
Hey sis! Yep it does clear a lot of things! And I loved this chapter and how Yumi finally figured out Ren's feelings for her ! I love Ren! *dreamy sigh* Not as much as Miguel though :)
Hey sis! Yep it does clear a lot of things! And I loved this chapter and how Yumi finally figured out Ren's feelings for her ! I love Ren! *dreamy sigh* Not as much as Miguel though :)
4/8/2014 c15 Guest
P.S thanks for the preview
P.S thanks for the preview
4/8/2014 c15 Guest
I love it soooooo much, I like how much Yumi went to make Ren confess . I can really relate to Yumi when she was going back to the cafe and could not belive what she just did. I think you got the stuff really good this chapter, cause so far it's my favorite. Can't wait till the next chapter (hint hint) and the dance!
I love it soooooo much, I like how much Yumi went to make Ren confess . I can really relate to Yumi when she was going back to the cafe and could not belive what she just did. I think you got the stuff really good this chapter, cause so far it's my favorite. Can't wait till the next chapter (hint hint) and the dance!
4/4/2014 c14 Abbey
I'm happy you updated on my birthday, but I 'm not so happy that the last two chapters are just repeats. I can be patient, though, haha.
I'm happy you updated on my birthday, but I 'm not so happy that the last two chapters are just repeats. I can be patient, though, haha.
4/4/2014 c14 Guest
We want update ! We need update ! Update ! Update ! Update !
We want update ! We need update ! Update ! Update ! Update !
4/3/2014 c14 Guest
Your welcome, (insert what I call you here )! Oh yeah, will Yumi ever be able to feel the threads that connect to her again? Maybe when Ren and her get togethr ? Also, how come you have not yet mentioned Halia yet ? What's the "secret" plan ? I hope the other 4 stories will be this good ! - Anonymous reader
Your welcome, (insert what I call you here )! Oh yeah, will Yumi ever be able to feel the threads that connect to her again? Maybe when Ren and her get togethr ? Also, how come you have not yet mentioned Halia yet ? What's the "secret" plan ? I hope the other 4 stories will be this good ! - Anonymous reader
4/1/2014 c13 choc me
Wait what? Yumi still didn't figure out that the reason she can't read Ren's love thread, is because he loves her? And laurence has been pretty clear in saying that she can't read her own threads. Speaking of Laurence...he's in love with that other woman, but still likes Yumi? And from what he's said, it seems like he has a crush on her..
Wait what? Yumi still didn't figure out that the reason she can't read Ren's love thread, is because he loves her? And laurence has been pretty clear in saying that she can't read her own threads. Speaking of Laurence...he's in love with that other woman, but still likes Yumi? And from what he's said, it seems like he has a crush on her..
4/1/2014 c12 choc me
Why are Ren's threads growing dimmer? Is it because he's giving energy to Yumi or is he keeping a big secret, one which would also explain why Yumi can't read his love thread?
Why are Ren's threads growing dimmer? Is it because he's giving energy to Yumi or is he keeping a big secret, one which would also explain why Yumi can't read his love thread?
4/1/2014 c11 choc me
Ohhhh cool! 3 updates at once!
They almost kissed! :)) And I bet Yumi can't see Ren's love thread because he's in love with her...It's sort of confusing and I'm really curious to find out what it's all about, and why Yumi thought Ren was in love with her sister..
Ohhhh cool! 3 updates at once!
They almost kissed! :)) And I bet Yumi can't see Ren's love thread because he's in love with her...It's sort of confusing and I'm really curious to find out what it's all about, and why Yumi thought Ren was in love with her sister..
3/30/2014 c6 Abbey
So this is how the oranges come into play.
I know I've mentioned this before but it needs to be repeated: your story is amazing! The writing is great. I see no grammatical errors. The pacing is just right. The plot is intriguing. And you effectively convey Yumi's thoughts and emotions. I can seriously feel her pain.
So this is how the oranges come into play.
I know I've mentioned this before but it needs to be repeated: your story is amazing! The writing is great. I see no grammatical errors. The pacing is just right. The plot is intriguing. And you effectively convey Yumi's thoughts and emotions. I can seriously feel her pain.
3/30/2014 c3 Abbey
This was a pretty intense chapter, haha. That was some great use of imagery, too.
This was a pretty intense chapter, haha. That was some great use of imagery, too.
3/30/2014 c2 Abbey
I like how you didn't start off the story right when she got her powers.
I like how you didn't start off the story right when she got her powers.
3/30/2014 c1 Abbey
The story already seems amazing! I'm Filipino and I recognized the whole Ate/sister thing. It's prety cool since I hardly read stories about Filipinos.
The story already seems amazing! I'm Filipino and I recognized the whole Ate/sister thing. It's prety cool since I hardly read stories about Filipinos.
3/30/2014 c12 neve
PLEASE UPLOAD!
PLEASE UPLOAD!
3/28/2014 c11 what's in a name
LOVE IT. I like that Yumi has plenty of flaws, but she always admits to them (with some help from Ren) and works hard to fix any wrong doing. More Ren and Yumi scenes please! They are so cute together :D
LOVE IT. I like that Yumi has plenty of flaws, but she always admits to them (with some help from Ren) and works hard to fix any wrong doing. More Ren and Yumi scenes please! They are so cute together :D