for A Goddess Wears Orange3/27/2014 c11 Guest
Good work, ( *insert what I call you here)! Please continue and all that stuff, blah blah blah. Oh, yeah I want to mention something : when Fran got angelo's surprise ( I will avoid spoilers ) Maybe um, you shoud add more detail to it, I know this is Ren and Yumi's story, but to me it seems rather hurried, or the events seemed to ocurr to fast. Anyway, I honestly LOVED it,. -Guess Who
Good work, ( *insert what I call you here)! Please continue and all that stuff, blah blah blah. Oh, yeah I want to mention something : when Fran got angelo's surprise ( I will avoid spoilers ) Maybe um, you shoud add more detail to it, I know this is Ren and Yumi's story, but to me it seems rather hurried, or the events seemed to ocurr to fast. Anyway, I honestly LOVED it,. -Guess Who
3/15/2014 c9 Guest
Glob, this is so awesome ! Please continue and stop being stressted. It's so sad that Yumi can't feel Ren's thread. :'(
Glob, this is so awesome ! Please continue and stop being stressted. It's so sad that Yumi can't feel Ren's thread. :'(
3/14/2014 c1 Guest
I love it so much. You're arealy good writer! I can't wait for the other four stories
I love it so much. You're arealy good writer! I can't wait for the other four stories
3/14/2014 c9 choc me
Wow...he makes her feel safe..sounds familiar..
I really, really hope you'll be uploading more chapters soon..This is so captivating!
Wow...he makes her feel safe..sounds familiar..
I really, really hope you'll be uploading more chapters soon..This is so captivating!
3/14/2014 c6 choc me
Ouch... :(
And why can't she see Ren's special thread? Is he preventing her from seeing it somehow? Powers of his own?
Ouch... :(
And why can't she see Ren's special thread? Is he preventing her from seeing it somehow? Powers of his own?
3/14/2014 c5 choc me
I don't really understand what happened when Yumi read Laurence's threads and I'm really curious..why did she feel like she'd done a terrible thing?
And I still think Ren is talking about Yumi, not her sister..
I don't really understand what happened when Yumi read Laurence's threads and I'm really curious..why did she feel like she'd done a terrible thing?
And I still think Ren is talking about Yumi, not her sister..
3/14/2014 c3 choc me
When Ren says "...she's the only reason I'm going back to your place.." and Yumi thinks he's talking about her sister, he's actually talking about Yumi herself I'd bet! Or I'd like to believe...
I really like how you described how Yumi sees the threads and connections, it's really original!
Your writing style is different in this story, more like watching a movie and having to guess about the characters thoughts and feelings, as opposed to an insight on their inner monologues..
When Ren says "...she's the only reason I'm going back to your place.." and Yumi thinks he's talking about her sister, he's actually talking about Yumi herself I'd bet! Or I'd like to believe...
I really like how you described how Yumi sees the threads and connections, it's really original!
Your writing style is different in this story, more like watching a movie and having to guess about the characters thoughts and feelings, as opposed to an insight on their inner monologues..
3/14/2014 c2 choc me
I'm sad for Yumi...but she's wrong about Ren not having feelings for her right?!
Oh and Ren's description reminds me of the layered hairstyle that used to be really popular among Asian actors. Kind of like Vic Zhou in Mars, or Mike He in devil beside you...
I'm sad for Yumi...but she's wrong about Ren not having feelings for her right?!
Oh and Ren's description reminds me of the layered hairstyle that used to be really popular among Asian actors. Kind of like Vic Zhou in Mars, or Mike He in devil beside you...
3/14/2014 c1 choc me
Hey sis! Wow thanks for the dedication! :)) That was unexpected and so very nice!
On to actually read the story now :)
Hey sis! Wow thanks for the dedication! :)) That was unexpected and so very nice!
On to actually read the story now :)