for After School Thrills12/28/2021 c19 marrybeth
Halo author, my name is Marry, i am an editor from fast growing platform, i would love to offer you something related to your work, may i know how to reach you professionally?
Halo author, my name is Marry, i am an editor from fast growing platform, i would love to offer you something related to your work, may i know how to reach you professionally?
6/30/2020 c18 
1TheStoryBookGirl
I'm so glad you have started updating again! I found your works a couple years back and I fell in love with them. You kinda inspired me to start writing my own mlm stuff back in the day. I was really surprised to get the email that you'd updated this and decided to reread it from the beginning. Its just as good as I remember it, and I am very eager to see where it goes!
1TheStoryBookGirlI'm so glad you have started updating again! I found your works a couple years back and I fell in love with them. You kinda inspired me to start writing my own mlm stuff back in the day. I was really surprised to get the email that you'd updated this and decided to reread it from the beginning. Its just as good as I remember it, and I am very eager to see where it goes!
7/18/2018 c14 Guest
I think I’m more team Asa. He’s just the better choice imo
I think I’m more team Asa. He’s just the better choice imo
7/23/2017 c12 Salem Phoenix
I love this story so so much! Your chapters are always kind of short which is both frustrating and pretty brilliant because it adds to how badly I want you to update. I'm really rooting for Jared and Asa. I just really really like Asa a lot and think he and Jared would be good together.
I love this story so so much! Your chapters are always kind of short which is both frustrating and pretty brilliant because it adds to how badly I want you to update. I'm really rooting for Jared and Asa. I just really really like Asa a lot and think he and Jared would be good together.
5/26/2017 c11 Tyndale
This chapter was masterfully done. Bravo! I loved every minute of it and the ending made me want to punch a wall. Sucks to have to wait.
This chapter was masterfully done. Bravo! I loved every minute of it and the ending made me want to punch a wall. Sucks to have to wait.
5/25/2017 c11 Guest
Oh christ. Jared can really do it just about anywhere huh. I admire his balls. I don't know who to root for... Both are so cute. Orgy maybe?
Oh christ. Jared can really do it just about anywhere huh. I admire his balls. I don't know who to root for... Both are so cute. Orgy maybe?
4/12/2017 c10 Fangirl
I've been waiting for an updaaaate! Pleeeaaaseee I wanna see some threesome/foursome action! (Teehee~)
I've been waiting for an updaaaate! Pleeeaaaseee I wanna see some threesome/foursome action! (Teehee~)
9/5/2016 c10 17cm-away-from-you
I like Miles but I also feel sad knowing it prob didnt work out between them. But thats ok cos he Has Jared lol I love when Jared blushes and acts cute infront of Mr H, cos it shows their age difference. I think i've followed this story for 2 yrs now (wow!) so please keep updating
17cm-away-from-youI like Miles but I also feel sad knowing it prob didnt work out between them. But thats ok cos he Has Jared lol I love when Jared blushes and acts cute infront of Mr H, cos it shows their age difference. I think i've followed this story for 2 yrs now (wow!) so please keep updating
9/4/2016 c9 Wait
Oh, a milesxblondiexjaredxasa foursome! Better! Brocest is wincest.
Oh, a milesxblondiexjaredxasa foursome! Better! Brocest is wincest.
9/4/2016 c9 Yayupdates
It's okay, just let them all hook up and have massive orgy. *vomits*
Asa's family seems to be okay, even though blondie warned jared.
I just want asaxjaredxblondie 3P. Also, gods, asa and jared are so funny.
It's okay, just let them all hook up and have massive orgy. *vomits*
Asa's family seems to be okay, even though blondie warned jared.
I just want asaxjaredxblondie 3P. Also, gods, asa and jared are so funny.
9/4/2016 c4 Hooot
3P. Yes me gusta. I want.
3P. Yes me gusta. I want.
6/23/2016 c9 7cm-away-from-you
well i cant blame you for slowing updating. I've been working on my story for 4 years lol and also dont know wheres its going. Asa and Jareds relationship is cute, I can't tell if Asa likes him in that way though; also I really wanna see Mr. H's crazy Sadist side again with Jared its so hot lol
Man I wish you could send me chapter you took down! As the story started out sexual in the first place i think it would have fit well. But I also like the build up.
well i cant blame you for slowing updating. I've been working on my story for 4 years lol and also dont know wheres its going. Asa and Jareds relationship is cute, I can't tell if Asa likes him in that way though; also I really wanna see Mr. H's crazy Sadist side again with Jared its so hot lol
Man I wish you could send me chapter you took down! As the story started out sexual in the first place i think it would have fit well. But I also like the build up.
6/23/2016 c7 7cm-away-from-you
eeeee i had exams and didnt see this update, Jared's double crush on Mr H and Asa is sooo cute
eeeee i had exams and didnt see this update, Jared's double crush on Mr H and Asa is sooo cute
2/10/2016 c8 TakaGuchee
I love how you write. Jared definitely is someone I'd like to see often in stories. Hehe. Looking forward to your update!
I love how you write. Jared definitely is someone I'd like to see often in stories. Hehe. Looking forward to your update!