for sentimental static2/9/2016 c1 
44R.C. Wulfe
Alive with sentiment and visceral feelings, this was amazing each line drawing my attention deeper into this piece. It could easily be free verse poetry or the beginning of a magnificent story. This is masterful. Writing like this is why I enjoy reading, authors such as yourself are why I post here. This was deep with emotion and sentiment, but not the 'roses are blue' gush of sentimentality. (A thing I often wander to far in). I hope to read more.
44R.C. WulfeAlive with sentiment and visceral feelings, this was amazing each line drawing my attention deeper into this piece. It could easily be free verse poetry or the beginning of a magnificent story. This is masterful. Writing like this is why I enjoy reading, authors such as yourself are why I post here. This was deep with emotion and sentiment, but not the 'roses are blue' gush of sentimentality. (A thing I often wander to far in). I hope to read more.