
3/8/2016 c1
46CorkyBookworm1
"The longing in your heart is to be touched by His grace"
"and kiss the scar away"
Your style is so eloquent. This is beautifully written.

"The longing in your heart is to be touched by His grace"
"and kiss the scar away"
Your style is so eloquent. This is beautifully written.
6/15/2014 c1
16John-the-H-is-silent
Such a beautiful poem. Great symbolism. So many thoughts are expressed in here i can practically feel it. It's great.

Such a beautiful poem. Great symbolism. So many thoughts are expressed in here i can practically feel it. It's great.
4/3/2014 c1
1GoodKnight
DEATH-
Oh you gods… as to DEATH and killing, was not this perpetuation foreseen ?
Are thee so plagued of ego and poor design…
for you are shown to be so… in the use of thy own deficient mold
NOW… before there is a vortexing of dis-humanity
and to clear the name of “Almighty ” that you have taken…
and answer to the integrity of goodness
For indeed there is a rectification to be made
that DEATH… should feed itself - with itself

DEATH-
Oh you gods… as to DEATH and killing, was not this perpetuation foreseen ?
Are thee so plagued of ego and poor design…
for you are shown to be so… in the use of thy own deficient mold
NOW… before there is a vortexing of dis-humanity
and to clear the name of “Almighty ” that you have taken…
and answer to the integrity of goodness
For indeed there is a rectification to be made
that DEATH… should feed itself - with itself