for The Vampire's Slave5/2/2021 c32 E
Incredible story as always I just despise the long wait inbetween When can us hardcore fans expect the next chapter? Xx
Incredible story as always I just despise the long wait inbetween When can us hardcore fans expect the next chapter? Xx
2/12/2021 c32 Em
I KNEW IT! I Bloody knew it! AHHHHH and now we have to wait half a year for an update!
I KNEW IT! I Bloody knew it! AHHHHH and now we have to wait half a year for an update!
2/9/2021 c32 k
I KNEW IT! Thank u so much for updating u don't realise how many times I have read/reread this story. Please don't keep us waiting too long like last time for the next Chapter. I would literally pay for your work. If Victoria manages to escape I really want to see Anton's reaction! Really interested on what's going on with the other colonies too.
I KNEW IT! Thank u so much for updating u don't realise how many times I have read/reread this story. Please don't keep us waiting too long like last time for the next Chapter. I would literally pay for your work. If Victoria manages to escape I really want to see Anton's reaction! Really interested on what's going on with the other colonies too.
2/6/2021 c30 k
Any idea on when the next chapter will be? Keep checking on this story crazily often for an update
Any idea on when the next chapter will be? Keep checking on this story crazily often for an update
11/17/2020 c30 Neeeeeed more
Please, please pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee post something soon I literally check this story like every other day to see if you've updated. Pleaseeeeeee
Please, please pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee post something soon I literally check this story like every other day to see if you've updated. Pleaseeeeeee
10/25/2020 c30 AJ
This is an amazing story! the only thing I hate is the long wait between chapters :( :( Please please pleaseeeeee post soon!
This is an amazing story! the only thing I hate is the long wait between chapters :( :( Please please pleaseeeeee post soon!
10/25/2020 c30 AJ
I thought Bianca was supposed to be intelligent? Doesnt she realise if Victoria and Rachel escape she could be tortured for information as her guards are all aware their close.
I thought Bianca was supposed to be intelligent? Doesnt she realise if Victoria and Rachel escape she could be tortured for information as her guards are all aware their close.
9/12/2020 c30 anna
Darn it, I hate cliffhangers and the dreaded wait between chapter. I would honestly pay for work like this everything from the plot to the depth of the characters would be worth every penny. Please don't make us wait as long as last time (which is rather selfish of me as we are all aware you have your own commitments in the real world!). In my head I keep going back to this story, the world you have created is fascinating! Because you've created such a detailed world you always have the possibility of creating spin off stories based on this world. Once you've finished this story, you should seriously consider getting a publishers opinion/ or sell it as an ebook on amazon.
Darn it, I hate cliffhangers and the dreaded wait between chapter. I would honestly pay for work like this everything from the plot to the depth of the characters would be worth every penny. Please don't make us wait as long as last time (which is rather selfish of me as we are all aware you have your own commitments in the real world!). In my head I keep going back to this story, the world you have created is fascinating! Because you've created such a detailed world you always have the possibility of creating spin off stories based on this world. Once you've finished this story, you should seriously consider getting a publishers opinion/ or sell it as an ebook on amazon.
8/17/2020 c29 Spazthemagicbeanstalk
Once again a phenomenal method of handling a disturbing subject. I definitely cried a bit for Tori and what she was going through and you did a great job of portraying how hard that kind of topic is for people to talk about, and how she blamed herself despite it not being her fault at all, and how she lashed out from people she expected pity from... Very realistic and heartbreaking all around, great work.
Once again a phenomenal method of handling a disturbing subject. I definitely cried a bit for Tori and what she was going through and you did a great job of portraying how hard that kind of topic is for people to talk about, and how she blamed herself despite it not being her fault at all, and how she lashed out from people she expected pity from... Very realistic and heartbreaking all around, great work.
7/24/2020 c28 Please come back
This story is frankly addictive the last chapter was hard to read though. Anton has finally cracked and honestly is irredeemable after this,I really want to see Dante's and Biancas reaction.
When I was reading the story there was a part that mentioned vampire couples can only have a lottery for a baby after a death within the colony. Surely this would encourage the death of peasant vampires more often in order to have more lotteries? Soz if I'm going off on a tangent you've created a complex world and you are an amazing writer please continue it's been a while since u last posted!
This story is frankly addictive the last chapter was hard to read though. Anton has finally cracked and honestly is irredeemable after this,I really want to see Dante's and Biancas reaction.
When I was reading the story there was a part that mentioned vampire couples can only have a lottery for a baby after a death within the colony. Surely this would encourage the death of peasant vampires more often in order to have more lotteries? Soz if I'm going off on a tangent you've created a complex world and you are an amazing writer please continue it's been a while since u last posted!
7/14/2020 c28 need moreeeeee
when u gonna update? keep goin back to this amazing story xxx
when u gonna update? keep goin back to this amazing story xxx