for The Vampire's Slave2/7/2020 c26 Guest
Why doesn’t this story not have more reviews? I love it
Why doesn’t this story not have more reviews? I love it
2/6/2020 c26 YES
You’re back! YOU'RE BACK! I was so worried you had abandoned this story. Thank you for updating. I’m so nervous now about what’s going to happen. I have an inkling about what will occur, but let’s see!
You’re back! YOU'RE BACK! I was so worried you had abandoned this story. Thank you for updating. I’m so nervous now about what’s going to happen. I have an inkling about what will occur, but let’s see!
2/5/2020 c26 riverraieghn
This is well written. Different than most and I love it. Please updatebsoon
This is well written. Different than most and I love it. Please updatebsoon
1/7/2020 c25 Kat
A dark part of me wants to see Anton take his obsession up a notch and show some remorse for hurting Victoria. The reasonable, rational side of me is like I hope she escapes with Dante. Keep checking constantly to see if you've updated please don't make us wait too long xxx
A dark part of me wants to see Anton take his obsession up a notch and show some remorse for hurting Victoria. The reasonable, rational side of me is like I hope she escapes with Dante. Keep checking constantly to see if you've updated please don't make us wait too long xxx
11/22/2019 c25 Hi
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE.
It’s been two months :(
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE.
It’s been two months :(
10/15/2019 c25 E
I check everyday to see if you’ve updated! I’m waiting as patiently as possible
I check everyday to see if you’ve updated! I’m waiting as patiently as possible
9/28/2019 c25 Hello
What I want to know is: what happens when the children adopted by vampires, grow up? What happens to them?
What I want to know is: what happens when the children adopted by vampires, grow up? What happens to them?
9/23/2019 c25 Spazthemagicbeanstalk
I definitely felt like there had been some natural progression of Anton's change in attitude towards Tori, so it really felt like this was something that had been coming to a head. Especially since she started sleeping with Dante. I feel like he's about to decide that they can't be together now since part of her sneaking around was with him, but I'm interested to see how they move forward here!
I definitely felt like there had been some natural progression of Anton's change in attitude towards Tori, so it really felt like this was something that had been coming to a head. Especially since she started sleeping with Dante. I feel like he's about to decide that they can't be together now since part of her sneaking around was with him, but I'm interested to see how they move forward here!
9/23/2019 c25 Guest
Love it. Anton is starting to see her as a woman not just a slave. Scary stuff. C x
Love it. Anton is starting to see her as a woman not just a slave. Scary stuff. C x
9/23/2019 c25 Fan
Please please please keep being motivated! I’m beyond invested at this point. I have been checking for updates every day since the last time you updated. I squealed this morning when I saw you had updated!
This chapter was even more exhilarating than the raid chapter! Wow. Anton really terrifies me. He’s a fantastic villain. I reckon, his anger will become more perverted as he looses his grip on his own reality.
And obviously Dante will now seclude himself thinking he has indirectly caused Tori’s pain! I’m hoping things are now moving to a climax...I need some payback coming in the next couple chapters.
Please please please update soon! I don’t know if I can wait a whole month again for a chapter update when you have left us with such a cliffhanger!
Please please please keep being motivated! I’m beyond invested at this point. I have been checking for updates every day since the last time you updated. I squealed this morning when I saw you had updated!
This chapter was even more exhilarating than the raid chapter! Wow. Anton really terrifies me. He’s a fantastic villain. I reckon, his anger will become more perverted as he looses his grip on his own reality.
And obviously Dante will now seclude himself thinking he has indirectly caused Tori’s pain! I’m hoping things are now moving to a climax...I need some payback coming in the next couple chapters.
Please please please update soon! I don’t know if I can wait a whole month again for a chapter update when you have left us with such a cliffhanger!
9/22/2019 c25 
1Stormie-Daze
I mean it definately seems like Anton is becoming more obsessive. I'm hoping he performs more obsessive like tendencies in his usual cruel demeanor but that's me.
I was also thinking (sorry if this is from the original) but remember the first time Anton fed from Tori? In the room and he forced her to bed to get her reaction? I forget who told Tori that he would never have a relationship with a human but now it seems he does. . . I need a villain monologue to know what is changing within him.
I dont normally comment but I've literally been reading this story since day 1. Dont lose your passion I am seriously invested into this.
1Stormie-DazeI mean it definately seems like Anton is becoming more obsessive. I'm hoping he performs more obsessive like tendencies in his usual cruel demeanor but that's me.
I was also thinking (sorry if this is from the original) but remember the first time Anton fed from Tori? In the room and he forced her to bed to get her reaction? I forget who told Tori that he would never have a relationship with a human but now it seems he does. . . I need a villain monologue to know what is changing within him.
I dont normally comment but I've literally been reading this story since day 1. Dont lose your passion I am seriously invested into this.
9/12/2019 c4 Guest
this is really well written. an incredibly relatable character! very human
this is really well written. an incredibly relatable character! very human
9/4/2019 c24 Update
Please update soon! I need the next installment ASAP!
Please update soon! I need the next installment ASAP!
8/17/2019 c24 Elle
Update! Update! Update!
I’m so excited for the rest of this story!
Update! Update! Update!
I’m so excited for the rest of this story!