for The Vampire's Slave8/15/2019 c21 Philosophy of Slytherin
Oh my god! Finallyyyyy! Such a great chapter,
I love how you describe eyes, the saying, "Eyes are the window to the soul" comes to mind. Your writing style is very good, the only thing I'm missing is Victoria's strength, it seems quite hidden, like the scene where she was interrogated and she breaks the bonds.
Maybe this is purposefully done to keep it mysterious so it's not particularly a bad thing or anything.
Dante is a fantastic character, I love his cold exterior and that he has a warm interior.
Spoiler alert- (maybe) I have a feeling he and Janus are two sides of the same coin-
So glad they finally kissed! And Anton's affection is getting more and more intense!
Oh my god! Finallyyyyy! Such a great chapter,
I love how you describe eyes, the saying, "Eyes are the window to the soul" comes to mind. Your writing style is very good, the only thing I'm missing is Victoria's strength, it seems quite hidden, like the scene where she was interrogated and she breaks the bonds.
Maybe this is purposefully done to keep it mysterious so it's not particularly a bad thing or anything.
Dante is a fantastic character, I love his cold exterior and that he has a warm interior.
Spoiler alert- (maybe) I have a feeling he and Janus are two sides of the same coin-
So glad they finally kissed! And Anton's affection is getting more and more intense!
8/14/2019 c24 Hello again
You spoil us! Two updates in basically two days? Yay!
Wow- I don’t want to put any spoilers in your reviews...but this chapter through me. I didn’t think that about Dante- so I got him slightly wrong. But now it makes sense.
Great chapter!
You spoil us! Two updates in basically two days? Yay!
Wow- I don’t want to put any spoilers in your reviews...but this chapter through me. I didn’t think that about Dante- so I got him slightly wrong. But now it makes sense.
Great chapter!
8/14/2019 c23 Hello
WHEN I SAW YOU POSTED ANOTHER CHAPTER SO SOON I ALMOST DIED. YES YES YES.
You made a really crappy day so much better! Thank you for updating. And to update with a chapter like this...I’m speechless.
Literally...speechless.
I’m excited. Can you update just as quick again please? Or am I being greedy?
WHEN I SAW YOU POSTED ANOTHER CHAPTER SO SOON I ALMOST DIED. YES YES YES.
You made a really crappy day so much better! Thank you for updating. And to update with a chapter like this...I’m speechless.
Literally...speechless.
I’m excited. Can you update just as quick again please? Or am I being greedy?
8/12/2019 c23 Guest
Awesome chapter as always. The horrors of the quarter were so vivid as was the final snap for Tori.
Loved it. Cazzy20
Awesome chapter as always. The horrors of the quarter were so vivid as was the final snap for Tori.
Loved it. Cazzy20
8/11/2019 c22 Odnejsodn
Love it. Update please!
Love it. Update please!
8/10/2019 c22 1 Fan
Hi there, me again,
Great chapter! I’m loving the build up...something’s coming...I just hope Anton, the other high families and all the regulators get what’s coming to them. I also hope Dante learns a lesson or 100. There’s a lot to be said about this chapter. It shows real hurt and danger and the lifestyles the quarter humans live in.
It’s so sad...and it makes me angry because it isn’t too dissimilar from what goes on around us in the world today!
Another marvellous chapter and I know I’ll have to wait a whole month for another! But I’ll keep re reading until I get another!
Great chapter once again!
Hi there, me again,
Great chapter! I’m loving the build up...something’s coming...I just hope Anton, the other high families and all the regulators get what’s coming to them. I also hope Dante learns a lesson or 100. There’s a lot to be said about this chapter. It shows real hurt and danger and the lifestyles the quarter humans live in.
It’s so sad...and it makes me angry because it isn’t too dissimilar from what goes on around us in the world today!
Another marvellous chapter and I know I’ll have to wait a whole month for another! But I’ll keep re reading until I get another!
Great chapter once again!
7/11/2019 c21 Fan
Once again, just had to review- don’t have an account but lord almighty do I love this story! Your world is just so in depth, I hope you read reviews because I just want to say, I could see this being the next big tv show or series of films. It’s a different take on the vampire genre. Better than that twilight crap anyway.
So I need a prequel that talks about Lucian and Sofia. Seriously? You put that story there and then just leave it? I’ll even take a flashback!
I think I know where this story is heading- you’ve set things out so well that I think I’ve guessed your ending. It won’t stop me reading though! Or maybe you’ve deliberately set things down out just to bamboozle.
Loved this chapter. If I’m honest it was more exciting than the previous which I hope means, you’re getting to the climax.
Anton is, in my opinion, your best character. Perfect villain!
Once again, just had to review- don’t have an account but lord almighty do I love this story! Your world is just so in depth, I hope you read reviews because I just want to say, I could see this being the next big tv show or series of films. It’s a different take on the vampire genre. Better than that twilight crap anyway.
So I need a prequel that talks about Lucian and Sofia. Seriously? You put that story there and then just leave it? I’ll even take a flashback!
I think I know where this story is heading- you’ve set things out so well that I think I’ve guessed your ending. It won’t stop me reading though! Or maybe you’ve deliberately set things down out just to bamboozle.
Loved this chapter. If I’m honest it was more exciting than the previous which I hope means, you’re getting to the climax.
Anton is, in my opinion, your best character. Perfect villain!
7/9/2019 c21 Spazthemagicbeanstalk
Oh snap! And at the same time as what appears to be the Duke's growing affections for Tori? This is so not going to end well! Keep up the fantastic work!
Oh snap! And at the same time as what appears to be the Duke's growing affections for Tori? This is so not going to end well! Keep up the fantastic work!
5/24/2019 c20 Loveit
Eagerly anticipating the new chapter, such a complex and well written story with so many interesting elements! Please don't keep us waiting too long
Eagerly anticipating the new chapter, such a complex and well written story with so many interesting elements! Please don't keep us waiting too long
5/24/2019 c20 Guest
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4/25/2019 c20 aeparker55
I have really enjoyed this story so far. I think the plot and characters are great. There are several places where you mix up information though. For instance, tori switches from being 18 to 22 several different times as well as having different colored hair and other small things. I look forward to reading more.
I have really enjoyed this story so far. I think the plot and characters are great. There are several places where you mix up information though. For instance, tori switches from being 18 to 22 several different times as well as having different colored hair and other small things. I look forward to reading more.
4/14/2019 c20 Skye Blue Meadows
I just got done reading the latest update and wanted to tell you it was very good. I love the story line and characters and find it extremely interesting. I was so excited to see you had updated because I like this story a lot. I cant wait to see what happens in this story and watch everything unfolds. Thank you again for sharing your story with us.
I just got done reading the latest update and wanted to tell you it was very good. I love the story line and characters and find it extremely interesting. I was so excited to see you had updated because I like this story a lot. I cant wait to see what happens in this story and watch everything unfolds. Thank you again for sharing your story with us.
4/14/2019 c20 Guest
I miss reading this! Thanks for the new chapter 3
I miss reading this! Thanks for the new chapter 3
4/13/2019 c19 Fan
Okay- firstly, where you at?
This story is getting into new fazes. I have so many theories about what is gonna happen. Like I KNOW who Janus is. Also, something doesn’t seem right with Anton. You’re setting up all your plot points well. They’re making sense and they’re getting the readers to think. You’ve created a world with intricacies and details. Not many fictionpress authors can do that.
SO PLEASE UPDATE.
Okay- firstly, where you at?
This story is getting into new fazes. I have so many theories about what is gonna happen. Like I KNOW who Janus is. Also, something doesn’t seem right with Anton. You’re setting up all your plot points well. They’re making sense and they’re getting the readers to think. You’ve created a world with intricacies and details. Not many fictionpress authors can do that.
SO PLEASE UPDATE.
3/6/2019 c19 Jen
I have a question: how do they categorise blood? Is it on rarity or is it a number of factors?
I have a question: how do they categorise blood? Is it on rarity or is it a number of factors?