9/21/2014 c1 Lindalamr
Will there be an update any time soon? I found this story had great potential.
Will there be an update any time soon? I found this story had great potential.
5/31/2014 c10 skye real
Ooh the angst is absolutely terrible! Omg I hope they can find a way to be together somehow. Love the development of the story!
Ooh the angst is absolutely terrible! Omg I hope they can find a way to be together somehow. Love the development of the story!
5/21/2014 c10 Jester79
This should be fun! At the beach, looking at all these nice bodies - where's those sunglasses at? No need for everyone to know whose looking at who!
This should be fun! At the beach, looking at all these nice bodies - where's those sunglasses at? No need for everyone to know whose looking at who!
5/20/2014 c9 Jester79
How funny - his friends have come to save him from himself. At least they mean well. Sort of.
How funny - his friends have come to save him from himself. At least they mean well. Sort of.
5/19/2014 c8 Jester79
Such a sticky situation - yeah, I can't think how anyone is going to come out of this unscathed. I can feel the chemistry between Nathan & Laura, though. I think Laura & Jake are just, in her eyes, comfortable with each other. Looking forward to more.
Such a sticky situation - yeah, I can't think how anyone is going to come out of this unscathed. I can feel the chemistry between Nathan & Laura, though. I think Laura & Jake are just, in her eyes, comfortable with each other. Looking forward to more.
5/2/2014 c7 Chelsea
This is so great. I can't wait to read the rest of the story. I love the characters and even though I know what they're doing to Jake is wrong, I can't help bit root for Nathan to end up with Laura.
This is so great. I can't wait to read the rest of the story. I love the characters and even though I know what they're doing to Jake is wrong, I can't help bit root for Nathan to end up with Laura.
4/27/2014 c7 3Ally Stevens - Alicat76
Really enjoying this story. You've managed to make me feel sorry for all of them, Nathan, Laura, and Jake. I really hope Jake doesn't get his heart broken. He seems nice. But I want Nathan and Laura to be happy together. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Really enjoying this story. You've managed to make me feel sorry for all of them, Nathan, Laura, and Jake. I really hope Jake doesn't get his heart broken. He seems nice. But I want Nathan and Laura to be happy together. Looking forward to the next chapter.
4/21/2014 c4 Guest
I love your writing! I'm exciting about the new story!
I love your writing! I'm exciting about the new story!