for Yuki - 雪12/29/2014 c1 LJ58
Nice imagery. Very eloquent.
Nice imagery. Very eloquent.
12/19/2014 c1 
2063M2R
this has a very romantic atmosphere. I like the setting of mountain top and the pre-spring. It gives off a kind of sensuality and makes the reader feel rather jealous haha XD
I enjoyed this piece and the emotions you conveyed here very sweet, soft and gentle.
Dreamer
2063M2Rthis has a very romantic atmosphere. I like the setting of mountain top and the pre-spring. It gives off a kind of sensuality and makes the reader feel rather jealous haha XD
I enjoyed this piece and the emotions you conveyed here very sweet, soft and gentle.
Dreamer
4/25/2014 c1 Punslinger
A compact, graphic word picture that presents interesting possibilities for exploration. "frozen in time"
isn't original but it is a good metaphor here. It brings to mind occasions when our lives seem to be going nowhere and the passing time is meaningless. A chilling sensation.
A compact, graphic word picture that presents interesting possibilities for exploration. "frozen in time"
isn't original but it is a good metaphor here. It brings to mind occasions when our lives seem to be going nowhere and the passing time is meaningless. A chilling sensation.