for Come Back to Me6/26/2014 c22 Alenor
Heya, this is great! I can't wait for more, it's at the really suspenseful part! Or at least, I hope this is as suspenseful as it gets!
Heya, this is great! I can't wait for more, it's at the really suspenseful part! Or at least, I hope this is as suspenseful as it gets!
6/26/2014 c22 
3TheClosetWriter16
Right now this story is really depressing me... but that's good, because when I feel this much emotion while reading a story-it must be amazing :)
Hope you update soon!
3TheClosetWriter16Right now this story is really depressing me... but that's good, because when I feel this much emotion while reading a story-it must be amazing :)
Hope you update soon!
6/25/2014 c22 Guest
No no no no no no no no no no no no noooooo! Liam can not keep doing this to Sara :( I am holding out for a happier ending! I really am!
No no no no no no no no no no no no noooooo! Liam can not keep doing this to Sara :( I am holding out for a happier ending! I really am!
6/25/2014 c22 2DazzLing xD
I can't even hold in the tears. This was such an emotional chapter. I really hope Liam starts putting effort into working on himself.
2DazzLing xDI can't even hold in the tears. This was such an emotional chapter. I really hope Liam starts putting effort into working on himself.
6/25/2014 c21 3TheClosetWriter16
He's lost it. Not completely I hope.
I want him to open up. I want her to forgive. I want him to believe in himself.
Amazing story! Love it :)
3TheClosetWriter16He's lost it. Not completely I hope.
I want him to open up. I want her to forgive. I want him to believe in himself.
Amazing story! Love it :)
6/22/2014 c21 10919jasmine
I like how you make the characters so real. Like I actually hurt for Liam and Sara.
I like how you make the characters so real. Like I actually hurt for Liam and Sara.
6/22/2014 c21 pixiemidnight
That was the best story I've read on here In the longest time. I laughed, I cried, I spent the last 3-4 hours binge reading all the chapters posted. I love these characters especially the little details about them that make the story more engaging for me as a reader like the fact that Liam remembers Sara hates olives. I'm probably going to binge read all your other stories now. You're a fabulous writer. Thank you for sharing your gifts with the world. Apologies if this review is a ridiculous ball of cheese.
That was the best story I've read on here In the longest time. I laughed, I cried, I spent the last 3-4 hours binge reading all the chapters posted. I love these characters especially the little details about them that make the story more engaging for me as a reader like the fact that Liam remembers Sara hates olives. I'm probably going to binge read all your other stories now. You're a fabulous writer. Thank you for sharing your gifts with the world. Apologies if this review is a ridiculous ball of cheese.
6/21/2014 c21 Guest
I cant wait until the next chapter! Update soon!
I cant wait until the next chapter! Update soon!
6/21/2014 c21 2DazzLing xD
Awww. They're both spiraling in different ways. Poor Jordan though. He's probably so confused about the whole thing.
2DazzLing xDAwww. They're both spiraling in different ways. Poor Jordan though. He's probably so confused about the whole thing.
6/21/2014 c21 ReaderWriter2000
Spiraling might be putting what Liam is doing too gently, but I agree it's a good description. I immediately jumped on the chapter when I saw you had updated and I will continue to do so with future chapters. I'm really holding out hope that SOMETHING will pull this guy away from the edge.
Spiraling might be putting what Liam is doing too gently, but I agree it's a good description. I immediately jumped on the chapter when I saw you had updated and I will continue to do so with future chapters. I'm really holding out hope that SOMETHING will pull this guy away from the edge.
5/26/2014 c20 Jester79
Liam has so many things to come to terms with. Until he's really ready to face them I don't think he'll be able to move forward. Roy is a piece of work. Unless he's just completely miserable, I can't figure out why he's that way towards his family.
Liam has so many things to come to terms with. Until he's really ready to face them I don't think he'll be able to move forward. Roy is a piece of work. Unless he's just completely miserable, I can't figure out why he's that way towards his family.
5/25/2014 c20 shinju asuka
What a drama! I was really into your story. It left me speechless after reading this chapter!
What a drama! I was really into your story. It left me speechless after reading this chapter!