for The Spider Incident3/19/2015 c1 
1BritishEliza
I love it!
Sorry thats not much of a review is it? There's not really much to say but i love the idea of Athena being just a normal person and that idea about Arachne and her being friends is great!
1BritishElizaI love it!
Sorry thats not much of a review is it? There's not really much to say but i love the idea of Athena being just a normal person and that idea about Arachne and her being friends is great!
6/23/2014 c1 23Pandora Graves
I like the way you gave it a twist that gave the reader a different view on the whole situation.
well done :)
23Pandora GravesI like the way you gave it a twist that gave the reader a different view on the whole situation.
well done :)
5/7/2014 c1 6LaneKathryn
Hey, awesome story! I liked the fact that you used a popular myth but twisted it so it doesn't slam Arachne so much. Also, the end but where you explained that ' Arachne told dragonsrule22 to put the real version out there, that was really great because it gave you a purpose for writing the story :) well done!
6LaneKathrynHey, awesome story! I liked the fact that you used a popular myth but twisted it so it doesn't slam Arachne so much. Also, the end but where you explained that ' Arachne told dragonsrule22 to put the real version out there, that was really great because it gave you a purpose for writing the story :) well done!