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5/1/2014 c1 12Sepha
Huh… It's like "meh," but it's higher than that… ever so slightly.

The story appears as a post-war future where everything seems to have been lost to history. We're probably going to see some classics fantasy action, which is good. 4.6 out of 5.

Your characters seem to have well-defined personalities, which is good. The bad part is, they have close to zero description, unless I completely skipped it… 3.9 out of 5.

Your writing isn't bad… But it's not good, either. It's… meh. Yeah, that's probably the best way to describe. Because seriously, I doubt Impa fought with spheres. 3.3 out of 5.

With scores of story, characters, writing, and my enjoyment, Blood Brothers averages out to a score of 3.65 out of 5.

Should you read this? Yeah. No following, though. I guess it didn't reach that point… Ou well.
5/1/2014 c1 3Author Imagination 2007
Wow...this is an amazing story! Poor Mikhail...I know what it feels like to be picked on. I'm glad that this Samael guy is comforting him. This is a great start!

Where have you been hiding yourself, my BOFF! Best Online Friend Forever!

-AuthImagi '07

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