for Sleeping6/26/2014 c1 
71AlysonSerenaStone
I think you stayed on prompt a lot better than some of the other entries that I have read. This is a very good entry and this sure was one tough Star Crossed round. I really did like what you did this prompt. This is a good one shot!
71AlysonSerenaStoneI think you stayed on prompt a lot better than some of the other entries that I have read. This is a very good entry and this sure was one tough Star Crossed round. I really did like what you did this prompt. This is a good one shot!
5/9/2014 c1 exogenesissymph
I loved the story!
However, I noticed some inconsistency, I think.
In the very beginning Lex said her mother died, but later on Josh says that he didn't want her mom to walk in to see them cuddling. Did I miss something?
I think it would be better to introduce the topic of the fight earlier in the story? I had no idea why Josh was mad at her until they talked about it.
But I loved the story! Good work!
I loved the story!
However, I noticed some inconsistency, I think.
In the very beginning Lex said her mother died, but later on Josh says that he didn't want her mom to walk in to see them cuddling. Did I miss something?
I think it would be better to introduce the topic of the fight earlier in the story? I had no idea why Josh was mad at her until they talked about it.
But I loved the story! Good work!
5/3/2014 c1 7Life's Unexpected Turns
Ah the old friend-turned-boyfriend situation :) My favourite. Haha! I loved that reference to Romeo and Juliet btw - subtle. Good luck for the comp!
7Life's Unexpected TurnsAh the old friend-turned-boyfriend situation :) My favourite. Haha! I loved that reference to Romeo and Juliet btw - subtle. Good luck for the comp!
5/3/2014 c1 29deliriousdreams
hey ! :)
that's a lovely story! :)
really cute, i liked it :)
-Kira from Germany.
p.s. i'd be thankful if you'd check out my stories! :)
29deliriousdreamshey ! :)
that's a lovely story! :)
really cute, i liked it :)
-Kira from Germany.
p.s. i'd be thankful if you'd check out my stories! :)
5/2/2014 c1 Guest
I thought it was great and that you totally stayed by the prompt.
I thought it was great and that you totally stayed by the prompt.