8/4/2017 c1 yaraaaa
ahhhh crap i posted that review by accident cause i didnt finish writing but anyways Seg may have fallen out of love but who knows really except for you the author. I just need some closure and sorry if this sounds annoying. Ok byeee and hopefully you see this one day
ahhhh crap i posted that review by accident cause i didnt finish writing but anyways Seg may have fallen out of love but who knows really except for you the author. I just need some closure and sorry if this sounds annoying. Ok byeee and hopefully you see this one day
8/4/2017 c2 yaraaaa
This was a cute story. But what got me was when you put Seth from "Brown Eyes" in it and showed that he might not have ended up with Amy. I feel so bad and it hits me cause he loved her and probably realized it was to late or he fell out of l
This was a cute story. But what got me was when you put Seth from "Brown Eyes" in it and showed that he might not have ended up with Amy. I feel so bad and it hits me cause he loved her and probably realized it was to late or he fell out of l
2/15/2016 c1 Guest
AM I THE ONLY ONE WHO REALIZED THAT IT WAS SETH FROM BROWN EYES OMG
AM I THE ONLY ONE WHO REALIZED THAT IT WAS SETH FROM BROWN EYES OMG
12/19/2015 c2 Nicole
This story had me grinning like a fool. Thank you for writing such amazing pieces, I never fail to enjoy what I come read. 'My Guardian Angel' and 'Let Me Know' were the stories that had me sold to invest my reading aspirations in this site, and I can't express enough gratitude to you for giving us the privilege of appreciating the wonder that is your work. I. Can't. Get. Enough. The characters are amazing, the storyline is amazing, everything aspect explored that may come off as cliché was done so amazingly - I LOVED IT. The humour is fantastic, by the way, thank you for keeping us entertained with their wits.
I will venture into multi-chaptered stories of yours soon, despite - or should i say, as - my final year quickly coming up, I would surely need to let off steam, what better than doing so by indulging myself in some fiction-reading commitment (to your brilliant work, no less).
Once again, thank you! And I wish you all the best in whatever endeavours you have or may have!
This story had me grinning like a fool. Thank you for writing such amazing pieces, I never fail to enjoy what I come read. 'My Guardian Angel' and 'Let Me Know' were the stories that had me sold to invest my reading aspirations in this site, and I can't express enough gratitude to you for giving us the privilege of appreciating the wonder that is your work. I. Can't. Get. Enough. The characters are amazing, the storyline is amazing, everything aspect explored that may come off as cliché was done so amazingly - I LOVED IT. The humour is fantastic, by the way, thank you for keeping us entertained with their wits.
I will venture into multi-chaptered stories of yours soon, despite - or should i say, as - my final year quickly coming up, I would surely need to let off steam, what better than doing so by indulging myself in some fiction-reading commitment (to your brilliant work, no less).
Once again, thank you! And I wish you all the best in whatever endeavours you have or may have!
10/20/2015 c2 somersaultkick
Your characters feel so realistic.. are you sure they are not your friends or people you know? xD
This is so cute, just wow.
Your characters feel so realistic.. are you sure they are not your friends or people you know? xD
This is so cute, just wow.
3/11/2015 c2 guest
This filled me with happy giggles. Love it!
This filled me with happy giggles. Love it!
3/7/2015 c2 Guest
This was beautifully written! Thanks for sharing your stories
This was beautifully written! Thanks for sharing your stories
2/22/2015 c2 hideseekkeep
This piece deserves so many more reviews!
I absolutely adored the love story you told between Sun and Dennis. I truly felt for Sun and her conflicted feelings about whether or not she should tell Dennis the truth and risk ruining their friendship. The way you described Dennis coming to the revelation that he was in love with Sun was also very believable and well done. I'm so glad it worked out in the end...and I'd like to think that it ended up working out forever! They really do feel like they were made for each other.
Thanks for another moving story!
This piece deserves so many more reviews!
I absolutely adored the love story you told between Sun and Dennis. I truly felt for Sun and her conflicted feelings about whether or not she should tell Dennis the truth and risk ruining their friendship. The way you described Dennis coming to the revelation that he was in love with Sun was also very believable and well done. I'm so glad it worked out in the end...and I'd like to think that it ended up working out forever! They really do feel like they were made for each other.
Thanks for another moving story!
8/26/2014 c2 Damned to heaven
I love this.
I love this.
8/18/2014 c2 myst77
I love your sense of humor! And Sun... What a name! What a girl! She is strong, independent, and intelligent and at the same time she is sweet, kind, vulnerable and utterly, completely, totally, unabashedly in love! I loved her... She, from this day forth, is my idol! If I could be half the woman she is, I would consider myself successful.
And Dennis and co, I loved them all too! They are so real! When they are talking, I feel as I am in the room with them, as if I'm partaking in the conversation. But it's all thanks to you... You are a good writer. Keep it up! And good luck!
I love your sense of humor! And Sun... What a name! What a girl! She is strong, independent, and intelligent and at the same time she is sweet, kind, vulnerable and utterly, completely, totally, unabashedly in love! I loved her... She, from this day forth, is my idol! If I could be half the woman she is, I would consider myself successful.
And Dennis and co, I loved them all too! They are so real! When they are talking, I feel as I am in the room with them, as if I'm partaking in the conversation. But it's all thanks to you... You are a good writer. Keep it up! And good luck!
7/27/2014 c2 74AlysonSerenaStone
Wonderful two shot! I always come to to you whenever I want a good old cliched romance and this one did not disappoint!
Wonderful two shot! I always come to to you whenever I want a good old cliched romance and this one did not disappoint!
7/15/2014 c2 AngelsXDevils
Such a cute story! So fluffy and full of cutesy-ness! :) I love the relationship Sun and Dennis have!
Such a cute story! So fluffy and full of cutesy-ness! :) I love the relationship Sun and Dennis have!
7/2/2014 c1 heal me forever
Dude i was just rereading Pseudocliché coz i love it and went to ur profile and Bam! i find a story about characters of that one-shot 3 awesome
This is great by the way:)
Dude i was just rereading Pseudocliché coz i love it and went to ur profile and Bam! i find a story about characters of that one-shot 3 awesome
This is great by the way:)