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8/6/2015 c1 8rchll
Wow, first off, this is powerful stuff. I had a :O face by the end. By the end of this poem I was felt I could feel the poolside tile under my feet, as if I was there watching the scene pay out before me.

Some of my favourite words/phrases - "velvet shadows", "furnace", "still dripping in my hair", "i'm sorry mother, i think i died that day", & "the wetness of life".

There are a few extra "little words" that I think can be taken out to provide for better fluidity. For example, "that" and "but".
4/8/2015 c4 14Strawberrywaters
I am so sorry this has happened to you. I truly wish you well. I too can relate to much of what you have written here and if you want to talk, I am here. Beautiful poetry nevertheless.
3/7/2015 c22 2Amberflame805
Beautiful as always!
1/25/2015 c20 Amberflame805
Wow k
Lol this was great but I'm never taking anything after reading this xD
10/16/2014 c19 Amberflame805
Favorite chapter yet
10/15/2014 c18 Amberflame805
9/3/2014 c17 Amberflame805
8/11/2014 c1 1Iris Nightningale
I like your plot and I hope you will continue writing till it's end.
8/7/2014 c15 13Khuber
These are all really nice. Please keep updating. Hope to see more!
7/16/2014 c14 21Scribe of Dreams
This sums up my nights lately, I just haven't been able to put them into words. I like how you said it much better than anything I would've come up with anyway.
7/14/2014 c13 97rust phoenix
Very relatable and a good question.
7/14/2014 c10 rust phoenix
So much power in such a short poem. Sorry, I have a migraine and probably am not very articulate right now, but this is really good. Your descriptions of light and colour and smoke really emphasize the emotion.
7/14/2014 c1 rust phoenix
This is so powerful. Especially the last stanza. Extremely vivid.
7/6/2014 c10 17CTkett3h
Is this about self-harm? This poem sums it up. Again bad memories are resurfacing for me. This poem makes me miss it.
7/6/2014 c8 CTkett3h
I wish I could feel home in my own body...
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