for The Laundry Room3/23/2017 c1 Kirsty
I can't sign in to write this because I've already written one. Occasionally I come back to this story, because I love it so much. Thanks for keeping it here when so many writers take their work down.
I can't sign in to write this because I've already written one. Occasionally I come back to this story, because I love it so much. Thanks for keeping it here when so many writers take their work down.
2/28/2015 c1 
4RelaxedReady
Really something special here, excellent storytelling, original, great read can't wait to finish it! Thank you for sharing!
4RelaxedReadyReally something special here, excellent storytelling, original, great read can't wait to finish it! Thank you for sharing!
1/14/2015 c1 frouwe
This is the cutest one-shot I've read in a loooong while. Like even though the original notebook plot is ridiculous (in the best way, I assure you), you develop their relationship into this long, drawn-out, real thing. When he finally asks her out properly it seems like the natural progression of events ("fyi I thought we were already dating") and not just a cutesy baseless relationship born out of having sex once in college. It's all very enjoyable and surprisingly serious at the same time.
I really loved the image of him asking her name with his head between her thighs. The narration flowed so well that I barely noticed that you hadn't revealed their names until you did. The he/she/they never got redundant, so kudos on that too.
This is the cutest one-shot I've read in a loooong while. Like even though the original notebook plot is ridiculous (in the best way, I assure you), you develop their relationship into this long, drawn-out, real thing. When he finally asks her out properly it seems like the natural progression of events ("fyi I thought we were already dating") and not just a cutesy baseless relationship born out of having sex once in college. It's all very enjoyable and surprisingly serious at the same time.
I really loved the image of him asking her name with his head between her thighs. The narration flowed so well that I barely noticed that you hadn't revealed their names until you did. The he/she/they never got redundant, so kudos on that too.
12/26/2014 c1 6happysally
Oh my goodness, why hasn't this got more reviews?
I have to admit, I wasn't convinced to begin with but, oh my god, I'm so glad I read it.
This was genuinely the most adorable thing I've read in a long time!
Well done, I'm probably going to spend the rest of the night reading your other fics.
6happysallyOh my goodness, why hasn't this got more reviews?
I have to admit, I wasn't convinced to begin with but, oh my god, I'm so glad I read it.
This was genuinely the most adorable thing I've read in a long time!
Well done, I'm probably going to spend the rest of the night reading your other fics.
7/25/2014 c1 Tempest
I love this, someone needs to make this into a movie! It would be even better than The Notebook!
I love this, someone needs to make this into a movie! It would be even better than The Notebook!
6/17/2014 c1 3TheClosetWriter16
I am so glad I found this little gem. It's just about the cutest one shot ever. Absolutely loved it! :D
The characters... the plot... everything. Amazing :)
3TheClosetWriter16I am so glad I found this little gem. It's just about the cutest one shot ever. Absolutely loved it! :D
The characters... the plot... everything. Amazing :)
6/11/2014 c1 Guest
CUTE
CUTE
6/3/2014 c1 Guest
You're turning me into a hopeless roamntic. Beautiful, that's all I say.
You're turning me into a hopeless roamntic. Beautiful, that's all I say.
5/25/2014 c1 Blackdraumdancer
Aww, that's sweet! And very well written. And I love your characters!
Blackdraumdancer
Aww, that's sweet! And very well written. And I love your characters!
Blackdraumdancer
5/17/2014 c1 carrothead101
I'm so happy you exist
This was so perfect I'm in love
With your writing
Again.. Pretty much anytime you upload a new story or chapter
I'm so happy you exist
This was so perfect I'm in love
With your writing
Again.. Pretty much anytime you upload a new story or chapter
5/16/2014 c1 2loveableturtle
One of the best one shots I've ever read, I honestly loved it so much, both characters were so well developed and I just really enjoyed it you're such a great writer :)
2loveableturtleOne of the best one shots I've ever read, I honestly loved it so much, both characters were so well developed and I just really enjoyed it you're such a great writer :)
5/16/2014 c1 9Chie Wisdom's Daughter
This was beautiful! It kinda reminded me of a.. Uh, relationship I share with a friend of mine.. (We haven't met) and it gives me.. Hope. God. That sounds sentimental. By it was beautiful! I loved it!
9Chie Wisdom's DaughterThis was beautiful! It kinda reminded me of a.. Uh, relationship I share with a friend of mine.. (We haven't met) and it gives me.. Hope. God. That sounds sentimental. By it was beautiful! I loved it!
5/15/2014 c1 meaganmarie5
I loved it! To tell a story entirely in one page is ridiculously hard. But you captured their lives beautifully. The pacing was perfect. Wonderfully done.
I loved it! To tell a story entirely in one page is ridiculously hard. But you captured their lives beautifully. The pacing was perfect. Wonderfully done.
5/15/2014 c1 4SlashDrag0n
Wow. This is pretty dan well written. Especially how you don't reveal the names until the the way through I was like 'it's cool how they're not saying their names'. It was cooler that you did. That takes skill being able to write with no names and not making it sound repetitive.
I'm very jealous of your writing skills, and think this is a very sweet and well written story!
4SlashDrag0nWow. This is pretty dan well written. Especially how you don't reveal the names until the the way through I was like 'it's cool how they're not saying their names'. It was cooler that you did. That takes skill being able to write with no names and not making it sound repetitive.
I'm very jealous of your writing skills, and think this is a very sweet and well written story!