for I am Protector9/21/2014 c25 
1Krast Bannert
Bloody hell, was that an ending. Sorry about my extremely late reviews. Send me all your questions in a PM...can't really remember them right now and I'm about to leave. Now for the next one!
1Krast BannertBloody hell, was that an ending. Sorry about my extremely late reviews. Send me all your questions in a PM...can't really remember them right now and I'm about to leave. Now for the next one!
9/4/2014 c25 30Black Trinity
A satisfying conclusion to an even more satisfying book. I really am proud to have reviewed such a masterpiece, and hope mine own will be as good as this.
As for what I think would happen between those step sisters, Tawny will have to come back, no questions asked. O'cana, her too. But not too soon, some angst and effort need to be built on both.
Favorite scene? The penultimate chapter.
Looking forward to the third book in the series.
Blackout.
30Black TrinityA satisfying conclusion to an even more satisfying book. I really am proud to have reviewed such a masterpiece, and hope mine own will be as good as this.
As for what I think would happen between those step sisters, Tawny will have to come back, no questions asked. O'cana, her too. But not too soon, some angst and effort need to be built on both.
Favorite scene? The penultimate chapter.
Looking forward to the third book in the series.
Blackout.
9/3/2014 c25 9NovemberRose1
Nooooooo! You can't kill tawny! No way! If you kill her, you kill the book. And as for O'Cana, you can't kill her either. Again, if you kill her, you lose a lot of the plot.
I really want to see them ok in the next ones, and maybe even somehow bring back Koll, since we can still hear his voice.
Please start the next book soon! Please! I can't wait for the next installment! DO NOT leave us hanging! Lol.
9NovemberRose1Nooooooo! You can't kill tawny! No way! If you kill her, you kill the book. And as for O'Cana, you can't kill her either. Again, if you kill her, you lose a lot of the plot.
I really want to see them ok in the next ones, and maybe even somehow bring back Koll, since we can still hear his voice.
Please start the next book soon! Please! I can't wait for the next installment! DO NOT leave us hanging! Lol.
9/3/2014 c25 2Terra Booma
A great ending to a great little book! Looking forward to the next one!
Not sure what'll happen to them honestlly :P
I'd like to see more side characters with meaningful interactions, and honestly? Maybe a new protagonist
I really liked the whole Africa arc, continues to be my favorite
A
2Terra BoomaA great ending to a great little book! Looking forward to the next one!
Not sure what'll happen to them honestlly :P
I'd like to see more side characters with meaningful interactions, and honestly? Maybe a new protagonist
I really liked the whole Africa arc, continues to be my favorite
A
9/3/2014 c25 10Aquade
Wonderful ending! Can't wait to read the next book!
1. I really hope Tawny will be all right. I mean, I know her consciousness/mind is still there, but still. As for O'cana, she can go die for all I care.
2. I'm not exactly certain what I'd like to see. The story is progressing splendidly right now, and you're an amazing author, so I think I'd better let you choose.
3. Favorite part... probably when Koll told Tawny he still 'lived.'
10AquadeWonderful ending! Can't wait to read the next book!
1. I really hope Tawny will be all right. I mean, I know her consciousness/mind is still there, but still. As for O'cana, she can go die for all I care.
2. I'm not exactly certain what I'd like to see. The story is progressing splendidly right now, and you're an amazing author, so I think I'd better let you choose.
3. Favorite part... probably when Koll told Tawny he still 'lived.'
9/2/2014 c24 2Terra Booma
WELL THAT WAS QUITE TEH PLOT TWIST WASN'T IT
Answers!
1: I didn't really hate any of them, but I don't like any of the ones where O'cana wins
2: Omid or whatever his name was from the africa arc
3: Can't think of a thing I'd change, not personally
2Terra BoomaWELL THAT WAS QUITE TEH PLOT TWIST WASN'T IT
Answers!
1: I didn't really hate any of them, but I don't like any of the ones where O'cana wins
2: Omid or whatever his name was from the africa arc
3: Can't think of a thing I'd change, not personally
8/31/2014 c24 9NovemberRose1
MIND BLOWN! AUGH! Why you do this to me?! You couldn't have killed tawny. There's no way you could have killed her! And all those family relations, it all comes together! You have an amazing mind and are an amazing writer! That plot twist really threw me! Keep up!
9NovemberRose1MIND BLOWN! AUGH! Why you do this to me?! You couldn't have killed tawny. There's no way you could have killed her! And all those family relations, it all comes together! You have an amazing mind and are an amazing writer! That plot twist really threw me! Keep up!
8/30/2014 c24 10Aquade
Oh wow. So Ancela is actually Tawny's real father, and O'cana is Tawny's half-sister. I definitely did not see that coming.
Least Fav Scene: Hmmm... maybe when Ancela forced Mal to go back to the cell and leave Tawny... maybe
Fav Minor Character: I'm not sure
Something to Change: Nothing. I love the way everything in this story works together. Wouldn't change anything at all.
10AquadeOh wow. So Ancela is actually Tawny's real father, and O'cana is Tawny's half-sister. I definitely did not see that coming.
Least Fav Scene: Hmmm... maybe when Ancela forced Mal to go back to the cell and leave Tawny... maybe
Fav Minor Character: I'm not sure
Something to Change: Nothing. I love the way everything in this story works together. Wouldn't change anything at all.
8/30/2014 c24 30Black Trinity
Sudden twist, startling revelation, all worded with excellent grammar, consistency, and masterful skill.
Is this the same Inkfngrz that we knew?
I sure hope so, cause its the best chapter yet.
30Black TrinitySudden twist, startling revelation, all worded with excellent grammar, consistency, and masterful skill.
Is this the same Inkfngrz that we knew?
I sure hope so, cause its the best chapter yet.
8/21/2014 c23 1Krast Bannert
I could have sworn I already read and reviewed this chapter, but I guess I didn't...oh well. You need to focus on happy things. Seriously. This story is way too depressing. Of course, so are a lot of good movies and books...
1Krast BannertI could have sworn I already read and reviewed this chapter, but I guess I didn't...oh well. You need to focus on happy things. Seriously. This story is way too depressing. Of course, so are a lot of good movies and books...
8/17/2014 c23 9NovemberRose1
Poor tawny. And you left us hanging! Shoot! Very heart wrenching chapters. I really like that you make tawny very human. It seems very natural that she would want to die after all of that. Keep going!
9NovemberRose1Poor tawny. And you left us hanging! Shoot! Very heart wrenching chapters. I really like that you make tawny very human. It seems very natural that she would want to die after all of that. Keep going!
8/17/2014 c23 10Aquade
Mal isn't allowed to stay with her. Ancela feels guilty and miserable.
Tawny has no cause to live anymore.
Well, let's hope that things will turn around for the better.
Update as fast as you can!
10AquadeMal isn't allowed to stay with her. Ancela feels guilty and miserable.
Tawny has no cause to live anymore.
Well, let's hope that things will turn around for the better.
Update as fast as you can!
8/17/2014 c23 30Black Trinity
Torture me you say... well, i'm giddy with anticipation for the next chapter, if it's as important as you say.
30Black TrinityTorture me you say... well, i'm giddy with anticipation for the next chapter, if it's as important as you say.
8/16/2014 c22 2Terra Booma
Great as always, neat to see things from Mal's point of view
Got a sort of idea if you want to message me about it
2Terra BoomaGreat as always, neat to see things from Mal's point of view
Got a sort of idea if you want to message me about it