for I am Protector8/12/2014 c22 
10Aquade
Gosh! Tawny really was shot! 20% chance of recovery. 1% chance of full recovery. Not good odds at all...
10AquadeGosh! Tawny really was shot! 20% chance of recovery. 1% chance of full recovery. Not good odds at all...
8/11/2014 c22 30Black Trinity
I hope Tawny doesn't die... I've read too much, seen through too much to see her die...
And yet things would be more interesting if she died. I'll just read and see how you pull this one off. It's the most nerve-wracking chapter yet.
MOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRR!
You get the drill.
Blackout.
30Black TrinityI hope Tawny doesn't die... I've read too much, seen through too much to see her die...
And yet things would be more interesting if she died. I'll just read and see how you pull this one off. It's the most nerve-wracking chapter yet.
MOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRR!
You get the drill.
Blackout.
8/11/2014 c22 1Krast Bannert
You will have Tawny survive. No ifs, ans, or buts. She has gone through too much to die now, and she just found Koll again. For those reasons alone, she should stay alive.
Sorry about being late again. Lots of camping these past two weeks.
1Krast BannertYou will have Tawny survive. No ifs, ans, or buts. She has gone through too much to die now, and she just found Koll again. For those reasons alone, she should stay alive.
Sorry about being late again. Lots of camping these past two weeks.
8/8/2014 c21 9NovemberRose1
AUGH! Another cliffhanger! Don't do this to is! You're killing me! Lol... Awesome. A lot more action. :-) that's what I like. I hope hope hope that they don't kill Mal...
9NovemberRose1AUGH! Another cliffhanger! Don't do this to is! You're killing me! Lol... Awesome. A lot more action. :-) that's what I like. I hope hope hope that they don't kill Mal...
8/7/2014 c21 10Aquade
Did Ancela kill Tawny?!
Gah! Cliffhangers!
I hope Mal is all right...
Update soon!
10AquadeDid Ancela kill Tawny?!
Gah! Cliffhangers!
I hope Mal is all right...
Update soon!
8/7/2014 c20 Terra Booma
Hey! Sorry for the late review!
Great as always, a worrying chapter though...TO THE NEXT ONE
Hey! Sorry for the late review!
Great as always, a worrying chapter though...TO THE NEXT ONE
8/7/2014 c21 3TriSX
Good chapter. I'll be waiting for the next chapter because of how the suspense... is killing me. Until next time then.
-Chris
3TriSXGood chapter. I'll be waiting for the next chapter because of how the suspense... is killing me. Until next time then.
-Chris
8/2/2014 c20 30Black Trinity
It does fit, when you look at it in a way. I didn't expect a memory reboot though, interesting twist. This story is already starting to becoming something on a whole new level. And I am gonna see it through to he end.
I.
Need.
MOOOOOOOOAAAAAARRRRRRR!
You get the idea.
MOOOAARRR!
30Black TrinityIt does fit, when you look at it in a way. I didn't expect a memory reboot though, interesting twist. This story is already starting to becoming something on a whole new level. And I am gonna see it through to he end.
I.
Need.
MOOOOOOOOAAAAAARRRRRRR!
You get the idea.
MOOOAARRR!
8/1/2014 c1 9NovemberRose1
Lol, so first off, I am posting on chapter one because fictionpress will not allow you to post more than one review on a chapter... :-/ no fun. Secondly, I am clarifying that I did not mean to write "pretty old stuff" on that last review for chapter 20, but my iPhones auto correct decided to kick in and put that comment when I actually meant "pretty cool stuff". Lol. Sorry. Thought I would make sure you didn't think I was bashing your work, cause it's amazing. :-)
9NovemberRose1Lol, so first off, I am posting on chapter one because fictionpress will not allow you to post more than one review on a chapter... :-/ no fun. Secondly, I am clarifying that I did not mean to write "pretty old stuff" on that last review for chapter 20, but my iPhones auto correct decided to kick in and put that comment when I actually meant "pretty cool stuff". Lol. Sorry. Thought I would make sure you didn't think I was bashing your work, cause it's amazing. :-)
8/1/2014 c20 NovemberRose1
Awww, I was hoping that Koll would be alive for real somewhere. :-/ still some pretty old stuff, although it seemed like it was more of a filler chapter in my opinion. Maybe because I am used to your stories being more action packed. Lol. Keep going! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Awww, I was hoping that Koll would be alive for real somewhere. :-/ still some pretty old stuff, although it seemed like it was more of a filler chapter in my opinion. Maybe because I am used to your stories being more action packed. Lol. Keep going! Can't wait for the next chapter!
8/1/2014 c20 10Aquade
Koll's still 'alive'? Or at least his consciousness is. I wonder what's it like living in the databases...
This will probably lighten up Tawny's spirits... I hope...
10AquadeKoll's still 'alive'? Or at least his consciousness is. I wonder what's it like living in the databases...
This will probably lighten up Tawny's spirits... I hope...
7/26/2014 c19 Aquade
Teal is dead. Tawny is still in capture. And she keeps hearing voices in her head. O'cana catches rebels, brainwashes them, then sends them out again as spies.
On the plus side, Mal is still alive. He plans to help Tawny too!
Teal is dead. Tawny is still in capture. And she keeps hearing voices in her head. O'cana catches rebels, brainwashes them, then sends them out again as spies.
On the plus side, Mal is still alive. He plans to help Tawny too!
7/25/2014 c19 30Black Trinity
O'cana... I'm starting finally understand her a bit...
And the perfect downfall for such a cool, twisted villain comes up ding in my head. I swear, such types always get to me.
They want to go out with a bang, be known for something that they did. May it be the destruction of an entire country or helping a nation (Under false pretenses) they always want someone to remember them for something the villains did.
That's what O'cana is, I think.
30Black TrinityO'cana... I'm starting finally understand her a bit...
And the perfect downfall for such a cool, twisted villain comes up ding in my head. I swear, such types always get to me.
They want to go out with a bang, be known for something that they did. May it be the destruction of an entire country or helping a nation (Under false pretenses) they always want someone to remember them for something the villains did.
That's what O'cana is, I think.
7/25/2014 c19 9NovemberRose1
Is Koll still alive? I keep wondering that since she keeps hearing his voice... Poor Tawny...
9NovemberRose1Is Koll still alive? I keep wondering that since she keeps hearing his voice... Poor Tawny...