for I am Protector7/25/2014 c19 
1Krast Bannert
I am literally speechless and I have no idea why. I usually have some stupid/sarcastic remark, but not now. Sad chapter in my opinion, but so is this story, really.
1Krast BannertI am literally speechless and I have no idea why. I usually have some stupid/sarcastic remark, but not now. Sad chapter in my opinion, but so is this story, really.
7/25/2014 c19 2Terra Booma
Great as always Ink, sad though D:
I'm hoping Tawny remember that she does have a friend she can talk to in that girl who's name I forget.
2Terra BoomaGreat as always Ink, sad though D:
I'm hoping Tawny remember that she does have a friend she can talk to in that girl who's name I forget.
7/23/2014 c18 3TriSX
So Teal is dead... in the same time I feel hurt and in misery. Teal wasn't my favorite or least favorite but I what I saw is a dead loved one who was shot without warning... makes me want to think about my younger siblings... (Well that what war and conflict is supposed to be...)
And now Tawny is suffering with too much failures and backfires...let's see if she could cope with a lot of that failures and another added hole in her heart.
Oh yeah... O'cana is the worse B*tch I've ever saw.
3TriSXSo Teal is dead... in the same time I feel hurt and in misery. Teal wasn't my favorite or least favorite but I what I saw is a dead loved one who was shot without warning... makes me want to think about my younger siblings... (Well that what war and conflict is supposed to be...)
And now Tawny is suffering with too much failures and backfires...let's see if she could cope with a lot of that failures and another added hole in her heart.
Oh yeah... O'cana is the worse B*tch I've ever saw.
7/23/2014 c18 1Krast Bannert
All I have to say about the last two chapters: bloody hell, you are cruel to Tawny.
Anyways, yeah, I'm still alive. Shocker, really. I would have reviewed sooner, but soccer training is physically and mentally exhausting.
1Krast BannertAll I have to say about the last two chapters: bloody hell, you are cruel to Tawny.
Anyways, yeah, I'm still alive. Shocker, really. I would have reviewed sooner, but soccer training is physically and mentally exhausting.
7/22/2014 c18 9NovemberRose1
TEAL DIED?! NOOOOOOOOOOOO! I think my heart is breaking! My whole chest hurts now! Poor Tawny! I can't even imagine her state of mind and her emotions right now. I think I would want to commit suicide after all that...
9NovemberRose1TEAL DIED?! NOOOOOOOOOOOO! I think my heart is breaking! My whole chest hurts now! Poor Tawny! I can't even imagine her state of mind and her emotions right now. I think I would want to commit suicide after all that...
7/22/2014 c18 30Black Trinity
Yes, your own imagination is very annoying...
And fun! Plot twists! Angst! Death! Huzzah!
Sorry about the late review.
I might have lost a couple brain cells during and after the finals.
30Black TrinityYes, your own imagination is very annoying...
And fun! Plot twists! Angst! Death! Huzzah!
Sorry about the late review.
I might have lost a couple brain cells during and after the finals.
7/19/2014 c17 10Aquade
Yes, perhaps Tawny needs another girl friend. She should give Lintata a chance, and I think Lintata is being honest about it... hopefully.
Lio still has feelings for Tawny but she's still hurting from Koll's death...
For once, O'cana is at a lost! But who is these two she decided to use as a precaution?
10AquadeYes, perhaps Tawny needs another girl friend. She should give Lintata a chance, and I think Lintata is being honest about it... hopefully.
Lio still has feelings for Tawny but she's still hurting from Koll's death...
For once, O'cana is at a lost! But who is these two she decided to use as a precaution?
7/17/2014 c17 3TriSX
Yay new chapter. Now Tawny has a new friend... who is a mind reader of sorts. Now...lets see what you have in store for the next chapter
3TriSXYay new chapter. Now Tawny has a new friend... who is a mind reader of sorts. Now...lets see what you have in store for the next chapter
7/11/2014 c16 9NovemberRose1
Oooooo! Another amazing story! I can't wait for the next installment! I personally think that both of the them should survive, but mal maybe gets hurt or something along those lines... :-) I am def following this story... :-)
9NovemberRose1Oooooo! Another amazing story! I can't wait for the next installment! I personally think that both of the them should survive, but mal maybe gets hurt or something along those lines... :-) I am def following this story... :-)
7/8/2014 c16 2Terra Booma
Hey another Q and A!
Honestlly I'd like Mal to survive, Tawny's been through a lot.
and secondly, As much as I hate her, O'cana is the series antagonist, kill her and you lose a lot of conflict
2Terra BoomaHey another Q and A!
Honestlly I'd like Mal to survive, Tawny's been through a lot.
and secondly, As much as I hate her, O'cana is the series antagonist, kill her and you lose a lot of conflict
7/7/2014 c16 1Krast Bannert
It's alright. Trust me, I was on a huge roadblock for my story until about...two days ago in a car on my way to Atlanta. As for the questions, the answers are "yes" because Mal is cool, and "no" because O'cana is...there's actually no way I can put that nicely, but you catch my drift.
1Krast BannertIt's alright. Trust me, I was on a huge roadblock for my story until about...two days ago in a car on my way to Atlanta. As for the questions, the answers are "yes" because Mal is cool, and "no" because O'cana is...there's actually no way I can put that nicely, but you catch my drift.
7/7/2014 c16 10Aquade
Well, I like Mal, and I don't want him to die, but this is your story, so if you feel like going the other direction, be my guest.
Her memories are coming back! But they're coming and going... is O'cana playing g tricks on her? Or is her hold on Tawny weakening?
10AquadeWell, I like Mal, and I don't want him to die, but this is your story, so if you feel like going the other direction, be my guest.
Her memories are coming back! But they're coming and going... is O'cana playing g tricks on her? Or is her hold on Tawny weakening?
6/28/2014 c15 Aquade
So there isn't a resistance base in Africa. Then who's side were they from? They're against the Chosen, but yet not with the Resistance...
A plan to get Mallagon out of there before he gets hurt... this is going to be interesting.
Help the Resistance and possibly get killed but manage to (maybe) free the other Chosen, or walk out right now with the slim chance of survival but be (I think) free... I guess help the Resistance it is.
So there isn't a resistance base in Africa. Then who's side were they from? They're against the Chosen, but yet not with the Resistance...
A plan to get Mallagon out of there before he gets hurt... this is going to be interesting.
Help the Resistance and possibly get killed but manage to (maybe) free the other Chosen, or walk out right now with the slim chance of survival but be (I think) free... I guess help the Resistance it is.