for I am Protector6/28/2014 c15 
2Terra Booma
Great Chapter as always!
I have a theory that there WAS a resistance in Africa, just that they're so on the down low tech wise that other resistances don't really notice them
2Terra BoomaGreat Chapter as always!
I have a theory that there WAS a resistance in Africa, just that they're so on the down low tech wise that other resistances don't really notice them
6/28/2014 c14 10Aquade
What's happening? And now there's a sleep command for the Chosen?! If any of their enemies found out...
10AquadeWhat's happening? And now there's a sleep command for the Chosen?! If any of their enemies found out...
6/28/2014 c15 1Krast Bannert
Okay...well, that was partially unexpected, but unsurprising, considering the Department and O'cana.
1Krast BannertOkay...well, that was partially unexpected, but unsurprising, considering the Department and O'cana.
6/26/2014 c14 Krast Bannert
I have a feeling that our new friend (Hakato, right?) is a member of the resistance, as preposterous as that would seem given his home. Lovely plot twist. Keep it up!
I have a feeling that our new friend (Hakato, right?) is a member of the resistance, as preposterous as that would seem given his home. Lovely plot twist. Keep it up!
6/26/2014 c14 2Terra Booma
Sleep mode seems really exploitable, so I'm not sure how they'll find a way out of it. Maybe some sort of operation?
Great chapter as always!
2Terra BoomaSleep mode seems really exploitable, so I'm not sure how they'll find a way out of it. Maybe some sort of operation?
Great chapter as always!
6/23/2014 c13 1Krast Bannert
Great chapter.
1. I'd say Koll, but since he's...you know, I don't think he counts, so it'd be either Mal or Lio (and Lio's tattoos).
2. Favorite part would be...Tawny's speeches.
3. I think you know my least favorite part. It's not to hard to figure out.
4. Music suggestions - Soundtrack to Hearts of Iron 3, Queen, Mumford & Sons (if you don't already use their songs), Avenged Sevenfold, Avicii, 3 Doors Down, Dragonforce, the Foo Fighters, and the Doctor Who soundtracks.
1Krast BannertGreat chapter.
1. I'd say Koll, but since he's...you know, I don't think he counts, so it'd be either Mal or Lio (and Lio's tattoos).
2. Favorite part would be...Tawny's speeches.
3. I think you know my least favorite part. It's not to hard to figure out.
4. Music suggestions - Soundtrack to Hearts of Iron 3, Queen, Mumford & Sons (if you don't already use their songs), Avenged Sevenfold, Avicii, 3 Doors Down, Dragonforce, the Foo Fighters, and the Doctor Who soundtracks.
6/23/2014 c10 Krast Bannert
I think "Crimson Day" by Avenged Sevenfold would have been a great soundtrack for this. It's a rather sad song, and this is a rather sad chapter.
I think "Crimson Day" by Avenged Sevenfold would have been a great soundtrack for this. It's a rather sad song, and this is a rather sad chapter.
6/23/2014 c13 2Terra Booma
ANSWER TIME
I like Ethe, he's kinda like Han from star wars in his attitude.
I like this arc so far, japan sounds interesting.
Koll dying sucked. A lot.
No suggestions ATM, I'll let you know ifI come up with one
2Terra BoomaANSWER TIME
I like Ethe, he's kinda like Han from star wars in his attitude.
I like this arc so far, japan sounds interesting.
Koll dying sucked. A lot.
No suggestions ATM, I'll let you know ifI come up with one
6/23/2014 c13 10Aquade
One of my favorite characters, other than Tawny, is Lio, actually. He's just has the sort of personality that makes him one of my favorites.
I am loving the action scenes you have placed in this story and the ongoing battle between Tawny and O'cana.
This chapter seems to indicate that a twist is coming along, but perhaps the girl Tawny saw is significant to change it?
10AquadeOne of my favorite characters, other than Tawny, is Lio, actually. He's just has the sort of personality that makes him one of my favorites.
I am loving the action scenes you have placed in this story and the ongoing battle between Tawny and O'cana.
This chapter seems to indicate that a twist is coming along, but perhaps the girl Tawny saw is significant to change it?
6/20/2014 c12 3TriSX
Japan, land of the Rising... ahem... Setting Sun... well... I get the point there, almost the people there are rebles or under depression.
BTW Good Chapter!
3TriSXJapan, land of the Rising... ahem... Setting Sun... well... I get the point there, almost the people there are rebles or under depression.
BTW Good Chapter!
6/20/2014 c12 2Terra Booma
going to Japan? Sounds interesting!
how are the other countries in the world anyway?
America is the Federation and Japan is these Islands, what about places like Canada or Britain?
2Terra Boomagoing to Japan? Sounds interesting!
how are the other countries in the world anyway?
America is the Federation and Japan is these Islands, what about places like Canada or Britain?
6/20/2014 c12 10Aquade
And another mission for them to go on! Protecting Jack Tully, huh? Off to Japan then!
10AquadeAnd another mission for them to go on! Protecting Jack Tully, huh? Off to Japan then!
6/17/2014 c11 10Aquade
Looks like she's slowly healing. That's good.
And some explosions coming up soon. What's going to get blown up?
10AquadeLooks like she's slowly healing. That's good.
And some explosions coming up soon. What's going to get blown up?
6/16/2014 c10 Aquade
This brought tears...
She's not going to hold back now, and she wants revenge. O'cana had better watch out.
This brought tears...
She's not going to hold back now, and she wants revenge. O'cana had better watch out.