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5/26/2014 c1 167nickyO
I like the idea of breaking out of old patterns of thought and reaction that you present in this poem, nice feeling of self awareness too, backed by the images and word play.
5/25/2014 c1 Guest
A beautiful poem from a sweet and happy heart who has found the joy she deserves.
5/24/2014 c1 Punslinger
This was worth waiting for. A strikingly original take on a familiar theme - youthful breakthrough to a wondrous new level of awareness, with the joy of discovery mingled with apprehension of what is to come. Nice phrasing and a welcome relief from clich├ęs.

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