
6/30/2015 c5 Guest
Really liked it, I did not expect the naughty nerd though! Wish it was longer.
Really liked it, I did not expect the naughty nerd though! Wish it was longer.
7/23/2014 c4
14TheLadyOnTheMoon
That next chapter sounds promising, can't wait!
Meanwhile, I'm kind of confused as to why Zen is so angry. Maybe because Azira assumed he'd liked to spend time with the girls? Don't know, and I hope they'll clear it up soon.

That next chapter sounds promising, can't wait!
Meanwhile, I'm kind of confused as to why Zen is so angry. Maybe because Azira assumed he'd liked to spend time with the girls? Don't know, and I hope they'll clear it up soon.
7/19/2014 c4 spcecse7
Awwwww I have to wait a whole week? Dang it. I kinda think Azira to top unless Zen gets so mad and starts taking his frustration out on Azira then maybe he should top. Idk they would both be good in either position. I also think that Azira should just kiss Zen and Zen be all like it's about time...I guess I'm just a tad cliche and romantic that way lol. Or idk do many ways I could see this going in my head can't wait to what you do though. Can't wait for more and by the way GREAT chapter.
Awwwww I have to wait a whole week? Dang it. I kinda think Azira to top unless Zen gets so mad and starts taking his frustration out on Azira then maybe he should top. Idk they would both be good in either position. I also think that Azira should just kiss Zen and Zen be all like it's about time...I guess I'm just a tad cliche and romantic that way lol. Or idk do many ways I could see this going in my head can't wait to what you do though. Can't wait for more and by the way GREAT chapter.
6/3/2014 c2 412Chie
You're here! I'm down after Zander and Mika. But now you're here with this. I like this wish to see more
You're here! I'm down after Zander and Mika. But now you're here with this. I like this wish to see more
6/2/2014 c2 spcecse7
Can't wait for next chapter to see which one will finally say I love you to the other one. I personally think Zen might do it. Can't gosh I love ur writing : D
Can't wait for next chapter to see which one will finally say I love you to the other one. I personally think Zen might do it. Can't gosh I love ur writing : D
5/29/2014 c1
2heyitsstupidme
Yup, the idea itself is cliché, but I think you did a very good job. I like the characters (and their names) and that they have their own personalities.
Moreover, I think this was written well and I am definitely looking forward to reading the rest.

Yup, the idea itself is cliché, but I think you did a very good job. I like the characters (and their names) and that they have their own personalities.
Moreover, I think this was written well and I am definitely looking forward to reading the rest.