for Ignition7/3/2015 c2 
1Anna Sutherland
An interesting start - lots of tangled plot lines and conflicting motivations set up giving you plenty to work with in future chapters.
1Anna SutherlandAn interesting start - lots of tangled plot lines and conflicting motivations set up giving you plenty to work with in future chapters.
9/12/2014 c1 Guest
I loved the details; I could feel the chill in the air. This short segment gave a good introduction to (I'm assuming) the main characters. A strong start!
I loved the details; I could feel the chill in the air. This short segment gave a good introduction to (I'm assuming) the main characters. A strong start!