
3/31/2021 c1 Muhammad Adib
THIS IS JUST A BAD COPY OF HIMEGOTO
THIS IS JUST A BAD COPY OF HIMEGOTO
2/4/2015 c10
3Miles Montgomery
Interesting. Although the main character seems pretty self aware. He knows this is another universe.
You ever thought of making this into a visual novel? That would be extremely amazing.

Interesting. Although the main character seems pretty self aware. He knows this is another universe.
You ever thought of making this into a visual novel? That would be extremely amazing.
2/3/2015 c1 Grace
This is very interesting! Keep going!;)
This is very interesting! Keep going!;)
12/22/2014 c9 Miles Montgomery
That was a very good romantic comedy along the likes of other actual animes. I could here Vic Mignogna voicing Hime. Kind of sad all that had to end though. I was actually enjoying where it was going.
That was a very good romantic comedy along the likes of other actual animes. I could here Vic Mignogna voicing Hime. Kind of sad all that had to end though. I was actually enjoying where it was going.
12/22/2014 c8 Miles Montgomery
NO! You can't undo everything. He was getting his own harem and everything. You can't do this. That was pretty depressing.
NO! You can't undo everything. He was getting his own harem and everything. You can't do this. That was pretty depressing.
12/22/2014 c7 Miles Montgomery
Yusa? SHY? * looks around room at own anime. peeks outside for meteors* The world isn't ending?! This made me laugh SO hard. Grammar and spelling was much, much, MUCH better this chapter.
Yusa? SHY? * looks around room at own anime. peeks outside for meteors* The world isn't ending?! This made me laugh SO hard. Grammar and spelling was much, much, MUCH better this chapter.
12/22/2014 c6 Miles Montgomery
Uh...super confused. But this chapter practically had me rolling on the floor. Couldn't breathe. Suminoe got a shock. And so did Hime. Clicking next...
Uh...super confused. But this chapter practically had me rolling on the floor. Couldn't breathe. Suminoe got a shock. And so did Hime. Clicking next...
12/22/2014 c5 Miles Montgomery
I am doing victory air pumps in my head. You actually had a few more spelling errors littered through this chapter. I have a feeling you were rushed. Hopefully at some point, you can fix them. :)
I am doing victory air pumps in my head. You actually had a few more spelling errors littered through this chapter. I have a feeling you were rushed. Hopefully at some point, you can fix them. :)
12/22/2014 c4 Miles Montgomery
Why am I seeing a harem starting here? Or at least Hime/Okuba? I am really liking this. Must read more. A couple of grammar mistakes, not many. When you said go somewhere less, I think you meant somewhere else.
Why am I seeing a harem starting here? Or at least Hime/Okuba? I am really liking this. Must read more. A couple of grammar mistakes, not many. When you said go somewhere less, I think you meant somewhere else.
12/22/2014 c3 Miles Montgomery
This is just classic. I know when it finally comes time to reveal him, he is going to be so embarrassed, but not as much as all these boys. A couple grammar errors listed here and there. Nothing too major.
This is just classic. I know when it finally comes time to reveal him, he is going to be so embarrassed, but not as much as all these boys. A couple grammar errors listed here and there. Nothing too major.
12/21/2014 c2 Miles Montgomery
That was awesome. This story is incredibly well-written. Must read on.
That was awesome. This story is incredibly well-written. Must read on.
12/21/2014 c1 Miles Montgomery
Awesome opening chapter. Poor guy. He just has a tough life. Let's see how things turn out. Your grammar and spelling are pretty spot on. Not much to point out here. Good job. I don't find that often just on a random reading spree. :)
Awesome opening chapter. Poor guy. He just has a tough life. Let's see how things turn out. Your grammar and spelling are pretty spot on. Not much to point out here. Good job. I don't find that often just on a random reading spree. :)
9/27/2014 c7 HiroKunTheCool
The weird thingy with the google thing has done something so I can't use my account, but I never forget to follow something! Anyway, I found one obvious mistake, but everything is perfect.
The weird thingy with the google thing has done something so I can't use my account, but I never forget to follow something! Anyway, I found one obvious mistake, but everything is perfect.