
6/15/2014 c34
66forgottenwords7
Ah, this one rhymed ;)
Nice as always, the sensual tone was beautiful throughout and very potent within the last stanza. I liked the message in this.

Ah, this one rhymed ;)
Nice as always, the sensual tone was beautiful throughout and very potent within the last stanza. I liked the message in this.
6/15/2014 c33 forgottenwords7
I think this painted a good picture of what can be described as anxiety, particularly as though it is something separable from your physical body. Just wonderful!
I think this painted a good picture of what can be described as anxiety, particularly as though it is something separable from your physical body. Just wonderful!