for World of Colours6/15/2014 c1 
1iDancingNightmare
I'm curious to see how this works out! It is an excellent story, although if you don't mind constructive criticism, it had a lot of talking, and it would really develop the story if you went into more thought and detail.
1iDancingNightmareI'm curious to see how this works out! It is an excellent story, although if you don't mind constructive criticism, it had a lot of talking, and it would really develop the story if you went into more thought and detail.