for body parts7/14/2014 c4 
97rust phoenix
You use space imagery very effectively. It really highlights the emotions.
97rust phoenixYou use space imagery very effectively. It really highlights the emotions.
7/14/2014 c3 rust phoenix
I like the contrast between the intensity of the action and the gentleness of how you describe it.
I like the contrast between the intensity of the action and the gentleness of how you describe it.
7/14/2014 c1 rust phoenix
You have really vivid and beautiful descriptions. I love the softness of your words combined with the emotional intensity. The lowercase letters work perfectly for it. I love the title too.
You have really vivid and beautiful descriptions. I love the softness of your words combined with the emotional intensity. The lowercase letters work perfectly for it. I love the title too.