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3/8/2015 c2 Justsimplyme123
LOL post again soon! Really great start!
6/22/2014 c3 wolfhound22
Hahahaha! I knew it! Amethyst and Achelous! Hahahaha!
So, does Adranis really have eye problems or no? Cause it doesn't make sense with what he says, it's like double negatives or something... And the girls in there are stupid, cause looks don't mean anything when brains are in check and I'm pretty sure those girls only have the pretty half of the equation.
Just update as soon as you can! Please! I really like where this is going!
6/20/2014 c2 wolfhound22
Fav line: This is a school not a strip club! - Haha! That's how I feel whenever I walk through my school with all the short skirts and halter tops and yoga pants that you can see through... Yep. Best line ever!
Anyway, that guy in the last line was a creeper and is her bro going out with Amethyst cause that would make sense why he went red... just thinking out loud...
Good job! I can't wait to see what you do next!
6/19/2014 c1 wolfhound22
So... I really like it. Personally, I think you handled (lord, help me spell) Achelous really well considering you made him look like a son of a (fill in the blank with nasty word of choice). :3 Anyway, I hope you continue with this AMAZING story and I can't wait to see how it turns out!

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