12/30/2018 c25 Guest
Mmmmrrgh. I thought the brother love of Friday night's that likely will never finish was a good story and it was. But this, this seemed to just make me wish I had ever met someone like that.
I don't know what his parents think of Tyler, have no idea if Avery has a father that's alive or not, and really don't like that Avery doesn't seem bothered by Tyler's smoking and such, but I hope they live together and love each other. A bit surprised Avery wasn't that bothered by Tyler having sex with Dana or hearing about other such things. Hopefully their love won't just be something based on sex in the end.
Not sure why his nightmares are really going away or why they started, but compassion can do a lot of things for us so maybe it was that.
Please finish the story as I do look forward to reading it.
I suspect the epilogue shows what happens after high school graduation and how they deal with college and such? I was a bit worried Avery would feel he couldn't back education and such and how far it might take the two of them. Tyler does deserve a proper roommate experience at college too even if Avery would want him to stay.
Good job. You've made me care.
Not so into the cigarette kisses one. Bothers me that Dana doesn't expose the real truth of what set off Tyler and doesn't indicate he broke their number one rule together. Honestly Dana and JC have hurt so many others that they deserve to suffer in my eyes.
Reminds me we never really did learn why Tyler was a bully and just how bad Tyler had treated Avery in school and what his thoughts were when doing so. Calling each other friends in the span of two days despite that in the earlier chapter did seem to confuse me. As did the whole testosterone comment because it seemed a bit hard to comprehend the pattern of speech there.
Mmmmrrgh. I thought the brother love of Friday night's that likely will never finish was a good story and it was. But this, this seemed to just make me wish I had ever met someone like that.
I don't know what his parents think of Tyler, have no idea if Avery has a father that's alive or not, and really don't like that Avery doesn't seem bothered by Tyler's smoking and such, but I hope they live together and love each other. A bit surprised Avery wasn't that bothered by Tyler having sex with Dana or hearing about other such things. Hopefully their love won't just be something based on sex in the end.
Not sure why his nightmares are really going away or why they started, but compassion can do a lot of things for us so maybe it was that.
Please finish the story as I do look forward to reading it.
I suspect the epilogue shows what happens after high school graduation and how they deal with college and such? I was a bit worried Avery would feel he couldn't back education and such and how far it might take the two of them. Tyler does deserve a proper roommate experience at college too even if Avery would want him to stay.
Good job. You've made me care.
Not so into the cigarette kisses one. Bothers me that Dana doesn't expose the real truth of what set off Tyler and doesn't indicate he broke their number one rule together. Honestly Dana and JC have hurt so many others that they deserve to suffer in my eyes.
Reminds me we never really did learn why Tyler was a bully and just how bad Tyler had treated Avery in school and what his thoughts were when doing so. Calling each other friends in the span of two days despite that in the earlier chapter did seem to confuse me. As did the whole testosterone comment because it seemed a bit hard to comprehend the pattern of speech there.
8/17/2018 c25 Chimel321
I really liked this chapter and I can’t wait for the next. Thanks for not giving up on this beautiful a story.
I really liked this chapter and I can’t wait for the next. Thanks for not giving up on this beautiful a story.
7/26/2018 c24 Chimel321
I really liked this chapter and I can’t wait for the next. You are such a good writer so keep it up !
I really liked this chapter and I can’t wait for the next. You are such a good writer so keep it up !
5/18/2017 c20 1AyEIOuU
Damn, after punching the dana obstacle out of their way, their relation-ship is now blasting full speed ahead! Snogging at school? What a ballsy couple.
I'm glad to see your stories pop up more often on the most recent page. I'm not really bothered about which, since I follow most of them hah.
Damn, after punching the dana obstacle out of their way, their relation-ship is now blasting full speed ahead! Snogging at school? What a ballsy couple.
I'm glad to see your stories pop up more often on the most recent page. I'm not really bothered about which, since I follow most of them hah.
10/25/2016 c18 AyEIOuU
As a reviewer, yes. The chapter is pretty bare. It can definitely use more work. Everything does.
As a reader, I don't care. I just want more cuddling! It's in the title!
As a reviewer, yes. The chapter is pretty bare. It can definitely use more work. Everything does.
As a reader, I don't care. I just want more cuddling! It's in the title!
6/18/2016 c17 Chocolatecoke
Thank you for updating! I wonder where Tyler and Avery will sleep now...
Thank you for updating! I wonder where Tyler and Avery will sleep now...
6/2/2016 c17 2CoralReef1029
I loved this chapter. The last line really got me. Oh the feels. I wonder what is in store for their relationship. : )
I loved this chapter. The last line really got me. Oh the feels. I wonder what is in store for their relationship. : )
7/29/2015 c16 aerifia
Awwwwww :) I'm happy they're on the road to forgiveness.
And of course we'll stick around! You're a really good writer and this is a really interesting story!
Awwwwww :) I'm happy they're on the road to forgiveness.
And of course we'll stick around! You're a really good writer and this is a really interesting story!
7/29/2015 c16 Sinalist
I'm falling in love with Tyler, fully knowing there is not even a remote possibility in an alternate universe of us ever having a relationship.
So cuuute!:3
I'm falling in love with Tyler, fully knowing there is not even a remote possibility in an alternate universe of us ever having a relationship.
So cuuute!:3