for A Little Excitement4/29/2019 c1 Superjew
Hey I’m totally in favor of s&m/kink factor or whatever but maybe you should put like a disclaimer or TW at the beginning be this story just reminded me of an experience I like to not think about. I really appreciate your grammar though
Hey I’m totally in favor of s&m/kink factor or whatever but maybe you should put like a disclaimer or TW at the beginning be this story just reminded me of an experience I like to not think about. I really appreciate your grammar though
7/8/2016 c1 Guest
Well fuck this was absolutely perfect
Well fuck this was absolutely perfect
8/13/2014 c1 
4rockspapersnscissors
Lmfao XD
This was great! I loved it, really! :D
You did an awesome job!
Thanks for the great read,
-RPS
4rockspapersnscissorsLmfao XD
This was great! I loved it, really! :D
You did an awesome job!
Thanks for the great read,
-RPS
6/30/2014 c1 9VisualKeiRocker92761
(O_O) officially having a nose bleed. I hope you guys decide to write more in the near future!
9VisualKeiRocker92761(O_O) officially having a nose bleed. I hope you guys decide to write more in the near future!
6/29/2014 c1 Myra Aliquis
I loved this story, especially the twist at the end as it was surprising and made Shane into an admirable and likeable character. However during the role-play I thought the interactions between the two characters were brilliant. I would be overjoyed to read another story about these two, or indeed any characters, if written with the same quality.
I loved this story, especially the twist at the end as it was surprising and made Shane into an admirable and likeable character. However during the role-play I thought the interactions between the two characters were brilliant. I would be overjoyed to read another story about these two, or indeed any characters, if written with the same quality.
6/28/2014 c1 13creativesmarts
I thought it was real until the end, and it ended so perfect, honestly. They were so cute, such an interesting couple
I love this XD Great job
13creativesmartsI thought it was real until the end, and it ended so perfect, honestly. They were so cute, such an interesting couple
I love this XD Great job
6/23/2014 c1 Amazing
Damn... You guys should have more role playing session. That was so hot! Now I'm late for work 'cause I didn't want to stop reading lol. Thanks for sharing it with us! Please share more!
Damn... You guys should have more role playing session. That was so hot! Now I'm late for work 'cause I didn't want to stop reading lol. Thanks for sharing it with us! Please share more!
6/22/2014 c1 Byakuyacchi
Aaaaaaaaah! XD I was practically drooling the whole time. I LOVE rough semes it makes things so much hotter! I love how you turned your role play into a nice erotic story for peeps like me *licks lips* I hope you two continue this wonderful collaboration cuz I will be following behind! :3 lots of love 3
Aaaaaaaaah! XD I was practically drooling the whole time. I LOVE rough semes it makes things so much hotter! I love how you turned your role play into a nice erotic story for peeps like me *licks lips* I hope you two continue this wonderful collaboration cuz I will be following behind! :3 lots of love 3
6/22/2014 c1 nonactive
*sends barrels of love to Maddam and Robin*
These two are so interesting! I love both Taylor and Shane! You guys actually had me believing it was real until the end, and then BOOM! Plot twist! Lovely collaboration, you two are brilliant. I roleplay a lot, so I love that you guys took roleplay and turned it into this lovely story!
*sends barrels of love to Maddam and Robin*
These two are so interesting! I love both Taylor and Shane! You guys actually had me believing it was real until the end, and then BOOM! Plot twist! Lovely collaboration, you two are brilliant. I roleplay a lot, so I love that you guys took roleplay and turned it into this lovely story!