for Truthfully9/8/2015 c12 hearthserpent
I really love it update soon
I really love it update soon
9/5/2015 c12 Guest
I'm loving this story, can't wait for next chapter
I'm loving this story, can't wait for next chapter
3/19/2015 c10 
4Cez Meister
That's such a cute date. So much tension that was released from Shina's life just in that one night.
But what really was great about this chapter was Logan and Kat. First of all, the fact that Logan made his way all the way to Kat's bar makes me ship it harder. Second, the fact that they don't arguing even if they are in front of someone makes me ship it. Third, THE FACT THAT SHINA SAID "I SHIP IT" MAKES ME SHIP IT.
I'm expecting a sailed ship. That is all.
4Cez MeisterThat's such a cute date. So much tension that was released from Shina's life just in that one night.
But what really was great about this chapter was Logan and Kat. First of all, the fact that Logan made his way all the way to Kat's bar makes me ship it harder. Second, the fact that they don't arguing even if they are in front of someone makes me ship it. Third, THE FACT THAT SHINA SAID "I SHIP IT" MAKES ME SHIP IT.
I'm expecting a sailed ship. That is all.
2/28/2015 c9 4Cez Meister
-places an arm around Anthony's shoulders- It's okay, bro. I know the feel of having no chance with someone you admire who is older than you. You'll live.
I was waaaaaaay more interested in hearing Angel's day than Shina's this time around. Mostly because she is so high school like. She found Kim attractive then got jealous of her without even knowing the back story. Classic jealousy act. I love how normal she is, too. Good stuff here.
KEEP THEM CHAPTERS ROLLING!
4Cez Meister-places an arm around Anthony's shoulders- It's okay, bro. I know the feel of having no chance with someone you admire who is older than you. You'll live.
I was waaaaaaay more interested in hearing Angel's day than Shina's this time around. Mostly because she is so high school like. She found Kim attractive then got jealous of her without even knowing the back story. Classic jealousy act. I love how normal she is, too. Good stuff here.
KEEP THEM CHAPTERS ROLLING!
2/25/2015 c4 lonewolf273
I really like the anticipation of the story throughout the entire chapter. From the start of the chapter to the flashback to the mysterious end, it gripped my mine and left me exited for more. I wonder who that person at the end is... :3 (though I have an idea)
I really like the anticipation of the story throughout the entire chapter. From the start of the chapter to the flashback to the mysterious end, it gripped my mine and left me exited for more. I wonder who that person at the end is... :3 (though I have an idea)
2/19/2015 c3 lonewolf273
I don't like where this is going... No like really... The resolution is really good and I really want to know what's going to go down next... I can't wait to read it!
btw, I want blood... I was ready for the dog to bite Kale and draw blood... but, if that happens again, I sure hope Shina's not going to take the next attacker lightly XD
I don't like where this is going... No like really... The resolution is really good and I really want to know what's going to go down next... I can't wait to read it!
btw, I want blood... I was ready for the dog to bite Kale and draw blood... but, if that happens again, I sure hope Shina's not going to take the next attacker lightly XD
2/18/2015 c2 lonewolf273
This introduction both brings a lot of context and brings up some anticipation to be attended to for the rest of the novel. I'm excited to read the next one!
One thing is that the beginning of the chapter and the last chapter seemed almost under the bus. This brings new questions that I'm exited to hear about later on...
This introduction both brings a lot of context and brings up some anticipation to be attended to for the rest of the novel. I'm excited to read the next one!
One thing is that the beginning of the chapter and the last chapter seemed almost under the bus. This brings new questions that I'm exited to hear about later on...
2/12/2015 c8 Cez Meister
Great chapter! I liked how they ended up meeting and how the appointment went. Angel is the jealous type. That could make things really interesting! :D
I like how you changed the point of view to Angel so that we could get how she felt about the day, too. Keep those chapters rolling!
Great chapter! I liked how they ended up meeting and how the appointment went. Angel is the jealous type. That could make things really interesting! :D
I like how you changed the point of view to Angel so that we could get how she felt about the day, too. Keep those chapters rolling!
2/3/2015 c1 lonewolf273
Excellent story thus far! It had me hooked from even the beginning. I can't wait to read the rest of it!
(btw, it's spelled "yuri")
Excellent story thus far! It had me hooked from even the beginning. I can't wait to read the rest of it!
(btw, it's spelled "yuri")
2/3/2015 c7 Cez Meister
Oh, shit. I'm so excited. I was holding back that fangirl in me so hard (I almost failed, too).
Those suspense builders were killers though! I love them so much. I cannot wait to see what happens between them. THEY BETTER ARRANGE A DATE RIGH THERE AT THE OFFICE!
Oh, shit. I'm so excited. I was holding back that fangirl in me so hard (I almost failed, too).
Those suspense builders were killers though! I love them so much. I cannot wait to see what happens between them. THEY BETTER ARRANGE A DATE RIGH THERE AT THE OFFICE!
1/30/2015 c6 Cez Meister
1) How dare you make mention of Maya. That program is terrible.
2) Apologetic Mushroom? lol the downside of knowing the writer.
3) I can't believe you made a Kuroko no Basket reference in this chapter.
4) Overall, it wasn't that bad. Not too bad because we got to see some character development of Anthony. We also got to see Shina at work which we really haven't. Good work. Keep it up!
1) How dare you make mention of Maya. That program is terrible.
2) Apologetic Mushroom? lol the downside of knowing the writer.
3) I can't believe you made a Kuroko no Basket reference in this chapter.
4) Overall, it wasn't that bad. Not too bad because we got to see some character development of Anthony. We also got to see Shina at work which we really haven't. Good work. Keep it up!
1/22/2015 c4 Anonymous
Really good work. I like how the beginning it shows Shina's, I assume to be, teenage years when she realizes who she is and how she detests her family for her past. And then it makes sense as to why she has that "no nonsense" attitude towards men. I really have to say though the events of Chapter 3 were epic and very unexpected which made what happened really amazing. Then in Chapter 4 the media res used made what happened known, but still leaves you with the urge to want to read more because you just want to know how it went down. Big thumbs up from my end and keep updating. :)
Really good work. I like how the beginning it shows Shina's, I assume to be, teenage years when she realizes who she is and how she detests her family for her past. And then it makes sense as to why she has that "no nonsense" attitude towards men. I really have to say though the events of Chapter 3 were epic and very unexpected which made what happened really amazing. Then in Chapter 4 the media res used made what happened known, but still leaves you with the urge to want to read more because you just want to know how it went down. Big thumbs up from my end and keep updating. :)
1/21/2015 c4 Guest
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1/6/2015 c3 kirbykibble
I really like this... Unlike those who tend to rush the romance, you're taking your time with it, developing character and whatnot. Kudos to you and keep uupdatin.
I really like this... Unlike those who tend to rush the romance, you're taking your time with it, developing character and whatnot. Kudos to you and keep uupdatin.