7/16/2014 c1 13Whisperedthing
Haha, this is based on Sims, isn't it? I've always wanted to read a story from their point of view! And hey, this guy doesn't have it so bad, at least his controller doesn't take ladders out of pools or lock him in a room with absolutely nothing just to watch him die. :P

It's an interesting read, for sure. I don't know how I would improve it. It was a bit of a tedious read, as you were just explaining everything that happened, but in a story like this I wouldn't even know how to improve it. Especially as it's just starting, I'm sure it'll get better as it moves along!

I loved the mysterious calls, by the way.