for RAPED6/25/2006 c1 
44Amara the Warrior
This is definately a start. And I'm sure you've gotten better too. It takes a lot to put your feelings up on here. Good job.
44Amara the WarriorThis is definately a start. And I'm sure you've gotten better too. It takes a lot to put your feelings up on here. Good job.
3/17/2006 c1 17Unique1952
Wow, this is very good and really descriptive. Please keep up the good work in your writing.
17Unique1952Wow, this is very good and really descriptive. Please keep up the good work in your writing.
2/26/2006 c1 droogie
this was, actually, very good. i loved it. sad, depressing, i just plain loved it.
this was, actually, very good. i loved it. sad, depressing, i just plain loved it.
10/1/2005 c1 35Strangerwithnoface
Interesting poem, I liked the concept, good subject too. Thank you for sharing.
35StrangerwithnofaceInteresting poem, I liked the concept, good subject too. Thank you for sharing.
6/2/2005 c1 6selectivelysane
acurate and realistic...i like it. not many realize or try to explain the feelings caused by such an invasion. this is a powerful poem.
6selectivelysaneacurate and realistic...i like it. not many realize or try to explain the feelings caused by such an invasion. this is a powerful poem.
5/8/2005 c1 14Angels-In-My-Heart
It's beautiful ,sad,and realistic I've been raped an those are all the right feelings to cinveyy and there is no such thing as cliche rape it is painful and leves yu full of shame period
14Angels-In-My-HeartIt's beautiful ,sad,and realistic I've been raped an those are all the right feelings to cinveyy and there is no such thing as cliche rape it is painful and leves yu full of shame period
3/28/2005 c1 156ShadowPharoh
excellent show of emotion. the delivery is cold, like she/he hated the world. i enjoyed reading it. great poem, greater poet!
SP
156ShadowPharohexcellent show of emotion. the delivery is cold, like she/he hated the world. i enjoyed reading it. great poem, greater poet!
SP
3/2/2004 c1 34Angry Fairy
that's great, i've written a true poem about my friend who was raped, you should check it out, it's called "lost"
34Angry Fairythat's great, i've written a true poem about my friend who was raped, you should check it out, it's called "lost"
12/3/2003 c1 Zesty
Hey,
I liked it, keep up the good work.
~Zesty~
Hey,
I liked it, keep up the good work.
~Zesty~