for The School Bully1/29/2016 c31 Ebs27
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Oh! Oh god! That was the saddest chapter like ever! I cried so much. Here I was thinking they were going back to have sex but it went a totally different way. POOR Leon baby! Awe! His in hospital
I hate his uncle! If I could I would rip his uncles private parts off and shove them down his throat! That's how mad I am
His his leaving? His not going to leave right? Oh I'm just hetting teary thinking about it. I hope you know what your doing
But all in all I loved the chapter I mean it did make me cry a billion times but I did re read it 3 times since you've updated.
It's my favorite story by far and it's like I'm really picky with my stories like really picky. If something I don't like happens in a story I'm reading I'll full stop reading it and be mad. I just don't want that to be this story because it means a lot to me I look forward to coming home and reading it
Leon and Sophia are amazing together and I hope they don't split up. Till next time
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Oh! Oh god! That was the saddest chapter like ever! I cried so much. Here I was thinking they were going back to have sex but it went a totally different way. POOR Leon baby! Awe! His in hospital
I hate his uncle! If I could I would rip his uncles private parts off and shove them down his throat! That's how mad I am
His his leaving? His not going to leave right? Oh I'm just hetting teary thinking about it. I hope you know what your doing
But all in all I loved the chapter I mean it did make me cry a billion times but I did re read it 3 times since you've updated.
It's my favorite story by far and it's like I'm really picky with my stories like really picky. If something I don't like happens in a story I'm reading I'll full stop reading it and be mad. I just don't want that to be this story because it means a lot to me I look forward to coming home and reading it
Leon and Sophia are amazing together and I hope they don't split up. Till next time
1/29/2016 c31 
1kc032d
What?!
Omg...this is torture. I love it but torture. Can't wait for the update.
1kc032dWhat?!
Omg...this is torture. I love it but torture. Can't wait for the update.
1/29/2016 c31 Guest
Poor Leon. TwT I'm crying. He's been through so much. Please update again soon :) because I really want to know what happens next! Especially between Leon and his dad! And Sophia!
Poor Leon. TwT I'm crying. He's been through so much. Please update again soon :) because I really want to know what happens next! Especially between Leon and his dad! And Sophia!
1/29/2016 c31 bev
Absolutely loved the chapter! Always puts a smile on my face to see an update (followed by tears when the chapter is so emotional). I want him to get better and, yet, want him and Sophia to stay together.
Can't wait for more :)
Absolutely loved the chapter! Always puts a smile on my face to see an update (followed by tears when the chapter is so emotional). I want him to get better and, yet, want him and Sophia to stay together.
Can't wait for more :)
1/29/2016 c31 Guest
It's so sad!
It's so sad!
1/29/2016 c31 Guest
This chapter made me cry so much. I'm glad his going to forgive his father but what does he mean take me away? I'm seriously scared. What's happening? Is Leon going to go away?
Am very emotional right now
This chapter made me cry so much. I'm glad his going to forgive his father but what does he mean take me away? I'm seriously scared. What's happening? Is Leon going to go away?
Am very emotional right now
1/29/2016 c31 21WafflesandUnicorn
I cried a little. I was holding back tears most of the chapter and then towards the end, a few escaped. Damn that was depressing.
21WafflesandUnicornI cried a little. I was holding back tears most of the chapter and then towards the end, a few escaped. Damn that was depressing.
1/29/2016 c31 2fe.jobs
When I started to read this story of yours, I read it on my phone, dunno why, I can't sent my reviews. never. There were time when I had already written a bunch of review (or in my case, comment) but when I press post, there was this error thing appeared on my screen. I remember you ever asked your readers to mention their country. I'm from Indonesia. 18. And I say, you have done a great work!
This is like, what, 10.24 pm, usually I've gone to my bed at this time, school's waiting tomorrow. And yes, I've gone to my bed, but as always, I checked your story, glad you've updated it 1 hour before, I read it... and guess what?
I cried.
I know it's common in people, but I do not cry over a written story. I'm not a type who cries easily, but yet, I cried. And then I thought, you deserve every compliment in my head. People call me weirdo for a good reason - and that would be me being not able to express myself as I imagine in my head. So if you get this thing annoying or weird or whatever, I don't mind.
I just wanna say this again:
GREAT JOB, MBAK!
2fe.jobsWhen I started to read this story of yours, I read it on my phone, dunno why, I can't sent my reviews. never. There were time when I had already written a bunch of review (or in my case, comment) but when I press post, there was this error thing appeared on my screen. I remember you ever asked your readers to mention their country. I'm from Indonesia. 18. And I say, you have done a great work!
This is like, what, 10.24 pm, usually I've gone to my bed at this time, school's waiting tomorrow. And yes, I've gone to my bed, but as always, I checked your story, glad you've updated it 1 hour before, I read it... and guess what?
I cried.
I know it's common in people, but I do not cry over a written story. I'm not a type who cries easily, but yet, I cried. And then I thought, you deserve every compliment in my head. People call me weirdo for a good reason - and that would be me being not able to express myself as I imagine in my head. So if you get this thing annoying or weird or whatever, I don't mind.
I just wanna say this again:
GREAT JOB, MBAK!
1/29/2016 c31 TicoTaco
TAKE ME AWAY ?! Dont you dare end it this way Author, I can't take it that way.
TAKE ME AWAY ?! Dont you dare end it this way Author, I can't take it that way.
1/29/2016 c31 Guest
Omg how could you!
Omg how could you!
1/29/2016 c31 Beyoncefever27
What does he mean take him away?! What's going to happen?
I'm crying right now. Please don't split my favorite couple up. Please.
What does he mean take him away?! What's going to happen?
I'm crying right now. Please don't split my favorite couple up. Please.
1/27/2016 c27 5Hilmary-Oceans
Just wanted to mention that I just started this yesterday, lost a whole bunch of sleep because of it, and now I'm at this chapter. The plot is incredibly addictive and I'm just devouring each chapter. Keep writing please!
5Hilmary-OceansJust wanted to mention that I just started this yesterday, lost a whole bunch of sleep because of it, and now I'm at this chapter. The plot is incredibly addictive and I'm just devouring each chapter. Keep writing please!
1/27/2016 c30 Beyoncefever27
Lol funny story when I read this I started crying and my friend was like "what's wrong?" And all I could muster out was "Leon's in pain" She looked at me like I was crazy haha
It was a very rocky chapter for me. My emotions kept swarming one way to another. Like Awe his cute to oh my god this is so sad. But your last few chapters have really hit the spot. I love hearing about Leon's past even though it brings to to tears every time I read it and I literly mean every time lol
I know a lot of people say this and I don't want you to be bored reading the comments like oh right someone said that oh and another person practically said the same thing but I speak from the heart and it's telling me to tell you that I seriouly adore all of your characters. All of them. I love them to pieces especially Leon's friends. They always crack me up and they also warm my heart deeply. In my honest opinion I wouldn't change anything about the story even if I could. It's perfect how it is and I can't wait to read more :) so excited.
All I do is blab about TSB to my friends and family so much so that they even want to read it to see what the fuss is about hehe
Lol funny story when I read this I started crying and my friend was like "what's wrong?" And all I could muster out was "Leon's in pain" She looked at me like I was crazy haha
It was a very rocky chapter for me. My emotions kept swarming one way to another. Like Awe his cute to oh my god this is so sad. But your last few chapters have really hit the spot. I love hearing about Leon's past even though it brings to to tears every time I read it and I literly mean every time lol
I know a lot of people say this and I don't want you to be bored reading the comments like oh right someone said that oh and another person practically said the same thing but I speak from the heart and it's telling me to tell you that I seriouly adore all of your characters. All of them. I love them to pieces especially Leon's friends. They always crack me up and they also warm my heart deeply. In my honest opinion I wouldn't change anything about the story even if I could. It's perfect how it is and I can't wait to read more :) so excited.
All I do is blab about TSB to my friends and family so much so that they even want to read it to see what the fuss is about hehe
1/26/2016 c30 Nex
These two chapters have been so sad, my heart aches for Leon. My eyes actually watered reading this. I'm scared about finding out the extent to which Leon has been hurt, and what his uncle did. I've had my fair share of abuse in my life, a sexual abuse survivor, and I know how it can mess a person up :(
Love the couple though! I can't wait to read more, I know Sophia can help him :)
These two chapters have been so sad, my heart aches for Leon. My eyes actually watered reading this. I'm scared about finding out the extent to which Leon has been hurt, and what his uncle did. I've had my fair share of abuse in my life, a sexual abuse survivor, and I know how it can mess a person up :(
Love the couple though! I can't wait to read more, I know Sophia can help him :)