for The School Bully6/3/2016 c39 
4kellyroyer
This story is such a good plot, and combined with how beautiful your writing style is, this is amazing. I absolutely love this. I have to admit, I read this in two day, shutting myself in my room so I could finish it. It really is a gorgeous narrativd
4kellyroyerThis story is such a good plot, and combined with how beautiful your writing style is, this is amazing. I absolutely love this. I have to admit, I read this in two day, shutting myself in my room so I could finish it. It really is a gorgeous narrativd
6/3/2016 c37 kellyroyer
I was literally squealing with joy when she figured it out and went to him, and I am not a person to use the word 'literally' figuratively. So imagine my disappointment when he said he was still leaving... Like! Okay I kinda understand, what with his father and everything, and I know it's really unrealistic for him to drop everything just to stay with one girl but HELL can I wish? She just said her day started with him! What's going to happen when he's never there? Ugh I guess I'll keep reading
I was literally squealing with joy when she figured it out and went to him, and I am not a person to use the word 'literally' figuratively. So imagine my disappointment when he said he was still leaving... Like! Okay I kinda understand, what with his father and everything, and I know it's really unrealistic for him to drop everything just to stay with one girl but HELL can I wish? She just said her day started with him! What's going to happen when he's never there? Ugh I guess I'll keep reading
5/29/2016 c39 Guest
I liked this story a lot but the only thing that really ticks me off is there wasn't much sexual things happening in the story. I mean you had great potential to make this story the hottest, sexiest, romantic, bad boy story ever but you lost it. And it was really unrealistic that Leon waited a while frigging year to have sex wit her I mean a guy like him waiting that long? It doesn't make sense. The second story is probaly going to have lots of sex maybe and I actually really wanted Leon and Sophia story's to have that not just Johns and Terrys. It was just a let down if I'm being honest. Your a great writer seriously you are but you just forgot to add the missing ingredient 'sex'. If you ever write another story of Leon and Sophia I hope it will have that sexual appetite everyone wanted.
I liked this story a lot but the only thing that really ticks me off is there wasn't much sexual things happening in the story. I mean you had great potential to make this story the hottest, sexiest, romantic, bad boy story ever but you lost it. And it was really unrealistic that Leon waited a while frigging year to have sex wit her I mean a guy like him waiting that long? It doesn't make sense. The second story is probaly going to have lots of sex maybe and I actually really wanted Leon and Sophia story's to have that not just Johns and Terrys. It was just a let down if I'm being honest. Your a great writer seriously you are but you just forgot to add the missing ingredient 'sex'. If you ever write another story of Leon and Sophia I hope it will have that sexual appetite everyone wanted.
5/23/2016 c39 Guest
I hope Leon and Sophia will always stay together for ever and always xo
The only problem I had with story is there wasn't much sexual chapters and I'm not telling you how to write your story because I loved it but I just wanted to see Leon and Sophia go at it a little more. I'm hoping maybe in the next boom like John, Terry, Skull, Rohan and Hannah catch Leon and Sophia having sex? Or hear them having sex? That would be so funny man haha
I could totally see Skull and Hannah together, I would ship them xo.
I hope Leon and Sophia will always stay together for ever and always xo
The only problem I had with story is there wasn't much sexual chapters and I'm not telling you how to write your story because I loved it but I just wanted to see Leon and Sophia go at it a little more. I'm hoping maybe in the next boom like John, Terry, Skull, Rohan and Hannah catch Leon and Sophia having sex? Or hear them having sex? That would be so funny man haha
I could totally see Skull and Hannah together, I would ship them xo.
5/15/2016 c39 ThatReviewer
Excited to read about Terry and John 3
Aww im legit crying because it's over. :( tears of happiness and joy all at once! Sophie and Leon will forever be my joy :3
Thank you a thousand dollars because the line about Leon and john's bromance. THANK YOU. I SHIP IT NOT IN A LEGIT WAY (leonSophia and TerryJohn as too cute) BUT IN A CUTE, ADORABLE, BROMACE-Y WAY.
I love you forever for writin my hero! 3
that new story better come on June 1st ;P
Love and kissed and cupcakes and hugs and brownies,
YOU MOST LOYAL FAN THATTREVIEWER
(or TotoDaDog, if you wanted to look me up on fictionpress)
BYE BYE BYE
HAPPY WRITING
I LOVE YOU
(okay bye for real)
Wait one more thing...
I had a legit dream about Leon x John. NO lie it was kinda funny XD
Bye legit this time ;P
Excited to read about Terry and John 3
Aww im legit crying because it's over. :( tears of happiness and joy all at once! Sophie and Leon will forever be my joy :3
Thank you a thousand dollars because the line about Leon and john's bromance. THANK YOU. I SHIP IT NOT IN A LEGIT WAY (leonSophia and TerryJohn as too cute) BUT IN A CUTE, ADORABLE, BROMACE-Y WAY.
I love you forever for writin my hero! 3
that new story better come on June 1st ;P
Love and kissed and cupcakes and hugs and brownies,
YOU MOST LOYAL FAN THATTREVIEWER
(or TotoDaDog, if you wanted to look me up on fictionpress)
BYE BYE BYE
HAPPY WRITING
I LOVE YOU
(okay bye for real)
Wait one more thing...
I had a legit dream about Leon x John. NO lie it was kinda funny XD
Bye legit this time ;P
5/15/2016 c14 10Itsa Mia
Uh, I'm sure someone else who speaks Japanese had already commented, and I get that you don't speak it but I just wanted to say that bitch isn't an insult in Japanese. Also, since she's that angry and only half the grammar is way too formal. I say this as someone who's second generation child of immigrants but I have yet to meet kids with perfect grammar that haven't studied their parent's language. I'm nitpicking but there's some things that rin my suspension of disbelief and unrealistic translation is one of them xD other than that I'm clearly engrossed or I wouldn't have gotten this far.
10Itsa MiaUh, I'm sure someone else who speaks Japanese had already commented, and I get that you don't speak it but I just wanted to say that bitch isn't an insult in Japanese. Also, since she's that angry and only half the grammar is way too formal. I say this as someone who's second generation child of immigrants but I have yet to meet kids with perfect grammar that haven't studied their parent's language. I'm nitpicking but there's some things that rin my suspension of disbelief and unrealistic translation is one of them xD other than that I'm clearly engrossed or I wouldn't have gotten this far.
5/14/2016 c39 1FuriaJump
Hello !
Sorry I didn't post a review before :) But I knew I wanted to finish reading this story to say all the things I thought of it !
To be honest, I didn't really have a good impression at first and I thought it was just as cliché as other stories in this website.
I was so very wrong.
You broke all my stupid judgements one by one. I loved the characters who weren't as stupid as I thought but in the contrary, they were deep. Leon isn't a stupid big badass boy, he's just a tortured boy who is very intelligent but don't want to be approached by everyone. Well, looks cliché when I say that but it really isn't, I loved the story of how he had to see her mother raped whilst he couldn't do anything because he was just a little boy. I loved the relationship of Leon and Sophia and even if I don't think it was really realistic in the beginning, she was becoming more and more aware of the things Leon did. And the last blow of their relationship was really interesting, because she couldn't just ignore that and I really liked the way she was truly afraid of the things he would do to her, it was something someone in real life could have done. I mean even if it's your boyfriend, you can't exactly act like nothing else matter apart for your love, right?
So yeah, thank your for the story and your time ;).
"Sleeping with the bully" seem really interesting, can't wait !
FuriaJump.
1FuriaJumpHello !
Sorry I didn't post a review before :) But I knew I wanted to finish reading this story to say all the things I thought of it !
To be honest, I didn't really have a good impression at first and I thought it was just as cliché as other stories in this website.
I was so very wrong.
You broke all my stupid judgements one by one. I loved the characters who weren't as stupid as I thought but in the contrary, they were deep. Leon isn't a stupid big badass boy, he's just a tortured boy who is very intelligent but don't want to be approached by everyone. Well, looks cliché when I say that but it really isn't, I loved the story of how he had to see her mother raped whilst he couldn't do anything because he was just a little boy. I loved the relationship of Leon and Sophia and even if I don't think it was really realistic in the beginning, she was becoming more and more aware of the things Leon did. And the last blow of their relationship was really interesting, because she couldn't just ignore that and I really liked the way she was truly afraid of the things he would do to her, it was something someone in real life could have done. I mean even if it's your boyfriend, you can't exactly act like nothing else matter apart for your love, right?
So yeah, thank your for the story and your time ;).
"Sleeping with the bully" seem really interesting, can't wait !
FuriaJump.
5/10/2016 c39 Emoji
I loved it but I aslo loved your other chapter as well. Your such a good writer. I have read chapter 38/9 like a hundred times, I love it xoxo I can't wait for June! It needs to come right now hehe
I loved it but I aslo loved your other chapter as well. Your such a good writer. I have read chapter 38/9 like a hundred times, I love it xoxo I can't wait for June! It needs to come right now hehe
5/10/2016 c39 5crbrgmi
I just spent the last 3 days binge reading this and I have to say how amazing it is. I can't wait until the next installment.
5crbrgmiI just spent the last 3 days binge reading this and I have to say how amazing it is. I can't wait until the next installment.
5/9/2016 c39 KrimsonCrusader
After the John and Terry story, I would love to see another one with Leon and Sophia. Like telling about their life after school and if his uncle returned.
After the John and Terry story, I would love to see another one with Leon and Sophia. Like telling about their life after school and if his uncle returned.
5/8/2016 c39 1WindSongEnchantment
GAH! AMAZING!I LOVE YOUR CHARACTERS! THEY ARE ABSOLUTELY STUNNING! JUNE CANNOT COME FAST ENOUGH!
1WindSongEnchantmentGAH! AMAZING!I LOVE YOUR CHARACTERS! THEY ARE ABSOLUTELY STUNNING! JUNE CANNOT COME FAST ENOUGH!
5/8/2016 c39 Guest
Hi. I agree this is a much better ending. In the sequel do you see Leon come back or is the focus on John and terry at the same time as this book.
Hi. I agree this is a much better ending. In the sequel do you see Leon come back or is the focus on John and terry at the same time as this book.
5/7/2016 c38 Guest
I loved it! So much. I'm glad they did it at his house first ;) i wanted him to eat her out lol will they be having sex in the second book? I hope so and the second book it's not going to be a love triangle is it? I hope not
What if Rohan likes Sophia? I'm worried that he does :( what will happen. I can't wait for your second book xox
I loved it! So much. I'm glad they did it at his house first ;) i wanted him to eat her out lol will they be having sex in the second book? I hope so and the second book it's not going to be a love triangle is it? I hope not
What if Rohan likes Sophia? I'm worried that he does :( what will happen. I can't wait for your second book xox