for The School Bully11/25/2014 c6 Guest
A great story that needs to be continued. I enjoy your storyline.
A great story that needs to be continued. I enjoy your storyline.
11/21/2014 c6 
5TMSantos
OH MY GOD A BOOK LIKE THAT EXISTS *GASP* I honestly thought that what people said about 50 Shades was... um, uncomfortable enough, but something more intense uh D:
AGH I'M SO EAGER TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER
5TMSantosOH MY GOD A BOOK LIKE THAT EXISTS *GASP* I honestly thought that what people said about 50 Shades was... um, uncomfortable enough, but something more intense uh D:
AGH I'M SO EAGER TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER
11/21/2014 c6 aly.king19
I love the story! I've read the one shot and I can't wait for the next chapter, this is the scene I have been waiting for. It seems like it would be a big turning point for their relationship.
Just a quick question: Do Leon's friends go to the same school as him and Sophia? And if they do than why are the rumors all about Leon and not about them?
I love the story! I've read the one shot and I can't wait for the next chapter, this is the scene I have been waiting for. It seems like it would be a big turning point for their relationship.
Just a quick question: Do Leon's friends go to the same school as him and Sophia? And if they do than why are the rumors all about Leon and not about them?
11/20/2014 c6 Guest
Your a very good writer. But slow on the updates, but I guess perfection takes time! ;) please update ASAP!
Your a very good writer. But slow on the updates, but I guess perfection takes time! ;) please update ASAP!
10/30/2014 c5 RandomReader1234
I'm loving this! Its fab :)
Personally the one thing I'm not a massive fan of is the way that Sophia writes in 1st person but when its about Leon its 3rd person. I think personally i would prefer it as all in 3rd person or make it all 1st person (ie put the name of the character before a section by them). That's really just something to potentially think about for a 2nd draft but it really is just personal preference.
Anyway, this is really good and I'm looking forward to more!
:) x
I'm loving this! Its fab :)
Personally the one thing I'm not a massive fan of is the way that Sophia writes in 1st person but when its about Leon its 3rd person. I think personally i would prefer it as all in 3rd person or make it all 1st person (ie put the name of the character before a section by them). That's really just something to potentially think about for a 2nd draft but it really is just personal preference.
Anyway, this is really good and I'm looking forward to more!
:) x
10/29/2014 c5 5butterbar
What's with all the calling and old man stuff?
Anyways, Sophia should definitely read sci-fi from now on! That was priceless. Leon is such a sucker. They're just too cute :P
I hope you can update soon! I'm really really really loving what I'm seeing right now. :)
5butterbarWhat's with all the calling and old man stuff?
Anyways, Sophia should definitely read sci-fi from now on! That was priceless. Leon is such a sucker. They're just too cute :P
I hope you can update soon! I'm really really really loving what I'm seeing right now. :)
10/29/2014 c5 Krimson Crusader
Love it. Please write more!
Love it. Please write more!
10/28/2014 c5 5TMSantos
HAHAHA
BDHM? Smiley? You made my morning!
And the part with 50 Shades was the best hahahaha
Oh but on a slightly more serious note, I wonder how she's part of the plan, why they chose her of all people. Oh well. :)
great chapter :)
5TMSantosHAHAHA
BDHM? Smiley? You made my morning!
And the part with 50 Shades was the best hahahaha
Oh but on a slightly more serious note, I wonder how she's part of the plan, why they chose her of all people. Oh well. :)
great chapter :)
10/28/2014 c5 Ngoc1231
I'm curious to see Leon's dad. That will be interesting. And this chapter just made me smile from Leon being so interesting, flip-floping and making her worried cus of his feelings for her. To see him be so forward about kissing her and him enjoying it.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Ngoc1231
I'm curious to see Leon's dad. That will be interesting. And this chapter just made me smile from Leon being so interesting, flip-floping and making her worried cus of his feelings for her. To see him be so forward about kissing her and him enjoying it.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Ngoc1231
10/21/2014 c3 Guest
Ohhh, its getting to much more exciting. Thanks for the chapter.
Ohhh, its getting to much more exciting. Thanks for the chapter.
10/5/2014 c2 Guest
Please UPDATE!
Please UPDATE!
9/19/2014 c4 Guest
Plleeeeease update!
Plleeeeease update!
9/16/2014 c4 junglered
I'm desperate for an update! Please UPDATE!
I'm desperate for an update! Please UPDATE!