for Between you and me8/22/2018 c4 Riley
God! Zero is such a bitch! 'I use and manipulate Aiden, but it's fine since it's not as bad as it could be if it was someone else'. What a piece of shit. And after Aiden's family took him in out of the goodness of the hearts too, I can't believe someone could be this ungrateful and shameless.
God! Zero is such a bitch! 'I use and manipulate Aiden, but it's fine since it's not as bad as it could be if it was someone else'. What a piece of shit. And after Aiden's family took him in out of the goodness of the hearts too, I can't believe someone could be this ungrateful and shameless.
8/8/2016 c1 purpiekush
Can you pleaze call this male fem or something cause I don't see a man being pregnant it ruin the sonic by friction franchise and it ruin the Ben and rook franchise not being a hater unjust saying go to fanfiction . Net or something cause malepreg is not hot. It's werid. Idont care what you say it's werid men are manly not fem I mean we gays but seriously. Only women should have kids you don't no how hard it is for women to have kids
Can you pleaze call this male fem or something cause I don't see a man being pregnant it ruin the sonic by friction franchise and it ruin the Ben and rook franchise not being a hater unjust saying go to fanfiction . Net or something cause malepreg is not hot. It's werid. Idont care what you say it's werid men are manly not fem I mean we gays but seriously. Only women should have kids you don't no how hard it is for women to have kids
7/19/2016 c1 Guest
Looking forward to reading this!
- Nekochan94
Looking forward to reading this!
- Nekochan94
6/30/2015 c6 Guest
Hehe show him who's boss Zero! Loved it!
Hehe show him who's boss Zero! Loved it!
6/30/2015 c5 Guest
It's kinda sad that it's taken Zero so long to notice being so sneaky he sure is oblivious. I like how the roles seem to be reversed though. And I can't wait to read the next chapter!
It's kinda sad that it's taken Zero so long to notice being so sneaky he sure is oblivious. I like how the roles seem to be reversed though. And I can't wait to read the next chapter!
6/30/2015 c4 Guest
Haha Aiden is too cute! I feel am little bad for him,with the way Zero uses him, but like he said, it could be worse! Love it!
Haha Aiden is too cute! I feel am little bad for him,with the way Zero uses him, but like he said, it could be worse! Love it!
4/12/2015 c12 Soraru
Really nice story. I loved how it progressed as they grew.
A really lovely piece of work.
Really nice story. I loved how it progressed as they grew.
A really lovely piece of work.
3/26/2015 c8 Guest
I guess you got tons of review right? Cause I like happy ending...
I guess you got tons of review right? Cause I like happy ending...
3/26/2015 c6 Guest
English is your second language, impressive!
English is your second language, impressive!
3/26/2015 c2 Guest
Like your story
Like your story
2/2/2015 c3 
1Sundavar
I think this story started out promising. You have the potential for a great plot and character development. Your writing feels a little rushed and unrefined due to an abundance of gramatical issues. I think that each chapter could use a thorough review for spelling and grammar mistakes. A beta reader would not be a bad idea. Many of the gramma mistakes are quick fixes :) I suggest using LibreOffice if Microsoft Word, or another application, is not available. I hope you take to time to refine this story so that it can shine here on FictionPress!
1SundavarI think this story started out promising. You have the potential for a great plot and character development. Your writing feels a little rushed and unrefined due to an abundance of gramatical issues. I think that each chapter could use a thorough review for spelling and grammar mistakes. A beta reader would not be a bad idea. Many of the gramma mistakes are quick fixes :) I suggest using LibreOffice if Microsoft Word, or another application, is not available. I hope you take to time to refine this story so that it can shine here on FictionPress!
11/30/2014 c12 sunnyciti
fan of mpreg, so this was a fun read, much thanks!
fan of mpreg, so this was a fun read, much thanks!
11/23/2014 c12 spcecse7
BEST BIRTHDAY PRESENT EVER! I love it thank you very much. I'm very sorry it took me so long to read it it's been crazy lately but I love it it's so cute
BEST BIRTHDAY PRESENT EVER! I love it thank you very much. I'm very sorry it took me so long to read it it's been crazy lately but I love it it's so cute